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Review of chapter "Death's New Granddaughter" from Arjen
I liked the story, it wasn't how I imagined the world to go on, but that's far from a bad thing. :-)
Hopefully you'll write the next story soon, so I can read that as well.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! I thought I ought to start with Susan seeing how she is my favorite character, and I wanted to think about what might happen with a Death in a young universe. Rincewind is coming up next and I think it might be up very soon.
Review By [Arjen] • Date [13 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death's New Granddaughter" from unicornzvi
Nice. However this line "She crept down the stairs, and froze time." makes no sense. If she froze time there'd be no reason to creep (besides which I have some difficulty imagining Sto Helit creeping anywhere).

I liked the young death concept.

The Unicorn
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I have corrected the sentence, it was a bit of a mistake. Susan wouldn't creep about at all. The young Death concept is one of my favorite ideas. I really like her. I, aswell, had that a stage when I was young, when I liked horses, and the color pink.
Review By [unicornzvi] • Date [11 Jan 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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