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Review of chapter "Death's New Granddaughter" from Arjen
Review:
I liked the story, it wasn't how I imagined the world to go on, but that's far from a bad thing. :-)
Hopefully you'll write the next story soon, so I can read that as well.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! I thought I ought to start with Susan seeing how she is my favorite character, and I wanted to think about what might happen with a Death in a young universe. Rincewind is coming up next and I think it might be up very soon.
Review By [Arjen] • Date [13 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death's New Granddaughter" from unicornzvi
Review:
Nice. However this line "She crept down the stairs, and froze time." makes no sense. If she froze time there'd be no reason to creep (besides which I have some difficulty imagining Sto Helit creeping anywhere).

I liked the young death concept.

The Unicorn
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I have corrected the sentence, it was a bit of a mistake. Susan wouldn't creep about at all. The young Death concept is one of my favorite ideas. I really like her. I, aswell, had that a stage when I was young, when I liked horses, and the color pink.
Review By [unicornzvi] • Date [11 Jan 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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