I liked it. This was a pretty good story. Your characterizations were spot on, and I liked how much fun Fred and the Doctor are having together. I really think she would make a fantastic companion for our favorite Time Lord, but I never even considered the notion until I read this story. Good work. Please keep it up.
Review By [loyaleskamoe] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I loved this. I'm not ashamed to admit that I'm a huge softy for Fred. She has always been my most loved character in a TV show. I cried when she died, but then Illyria turned out to be pretty damn badass as well.
Not enough people write Fred but you wrote her wonderfully. Thank you. It's great to see her so real and back to what she does best: eating tacos, inventing things, being fiercely loyal to her friends, and accomplishing the impossible.
This fic also, kinda reminds me of this short Edward Sizzorhands crossover ficlet someone wrote. Was that you as well?
An interesting concept -- and after Illyria ate her Fred -- arriving via the Daniel Jackson's ascended ones express. I hope you write more in this continuity. But even if you don't, I enjoyed it.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [11 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Now, this I liked a lot. I love Fred and think she'd make an outstanding Companion. I hope you write more stories with the Doctor and Fred. Oh, my. I wonder if Fred could make her own TARDIS if she set her mind to it? Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [11 Jan 07] • Not Rated
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