Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Joseph
This was okay
Review By [Joseph
] • Date [24 Jan 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MarcusSLazarus
Writing style has its problems at times- I wouldn't have minded seeing some more scenes with just Angel and Paige as they explored their new relationship, to say nothing of a scene or two looking at exactly WHEN the two of them 'conceived' Shawn without Angel's clause being triggered-, but what there was was definitely interesting reading.
If nothing else, it was good to see I'm not the only one who thinks that Angel and Paige would make an interesting couple; I'm writing my own series featuring them together myself at the moment, if you'd care to leave a review.
Keep up the interesting work,
Review By [MarcusSLazarus
] • Date [11 Oct 08] • Not Rated