Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
MarcusSLazarusReview:
The same problem and positives as the last story, really; you could have included more than you did- Paige suffering from cancer seemed to come COMPLETELY out of the blue, if nothing else-, but what is there is interesting, and it's really rather interesting seeing how Paige and Angel interact with each other.
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MarcusSLazarus] • Date [11 Oct 08] • Not Rated