I've just found this story and enjoyed what you've written so far. I see it's been awhile since you've updated but this is a good work and hope you decide to continue it. Take care.
I'm currently obsessed with the Dawn/Dean pairing (it's a pain that there aren't many fics about them). You write the pairing so well. I hope you will continue to write more :)
Some of the transitions between the first few chapters are a little confusing, might wanna clean that up a bit, or not, it's your fic. Overall I enjoy reading Dawn/ Dean and their interaction. I kinda didn't like Dawn's breakdown, but if it'll break the ice between the two, then onward and upward! Are you gonna get Sammy a girl? I get the impression that a lot of the brother's nervous tension would be gone if they both just got *ahem* laid...
Danke
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [13 Mar 07] • Not Rated
maybe i am mean, but i just love it when men are faced with women crying and do not know what to do. I think that is so sweet, unless of course they are mean bastards and made the girls cry in the first place...
Review By [chajalive] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Not Rated
