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Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Realizations" from spk
Review:
First, let me say that I'm SO glad that you picked this story back up. Second...OMG! I wish there was a higher rating than "10", so that I could give it to you for this chapter! It was absolutely, freaking GREAT!! I loved the way you wrote the characters. I am still laughing over Buffy's "want to use a lifeline -- ask the audience" line. And Jack's reactions...fantastic! I just had to re-read his realization paragraph. LOVED it! Can't wait for more!! :)
Review By [spk] • Date [8 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Realizations" from megan
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Love the update and glad you are going to finish it. I love the jack/buffy interaction and can't wait for the next update. Are you going to bring up how many times buffy died and buffy's boyfriends
Review By [megan] • Date [7 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Realizations" from (Past Donor)exiled
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I liked Buffy's argument on why they should believe her. This is a good story, I hope you continue it.
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [6 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Realizations" from TrevaRea
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I like... Can't wait for me.

Treva
Review By [TrevaRea] • Date [5 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Realizations" from immortalsilence
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ooohhh loving the fic thanks more pretty please
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [5 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Realizations" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
An interesting tale which I'm glad to see updated. Yes, how is Sam going to try and mend that? And considering they abandoned Buffy, who is their sister/daughter, why would Dawn want to meet with them, let alone tell them the truth about her?

btw, There's a discussion on the forum about security clearances, which might be pertinent for a two or three sentence re-write.

http://forum.tthfanfic.org/index.php?topic=8774.650

Many thanks for writing and sharing
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [5 Nov 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Realizations" from imokit
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UPDATE!!! THANK YOU!!!
And it was a really good one too! :)
Review By [imokit] • Date [5 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Realizations" from allaire
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Yay, you updated! I'd bemoaned the fact that this story's been abanoned quite a few times, even recently - and now there's a brand-new chapter! :-)))
Review By [allaire] • Date [4 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Realizations" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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wow sad but true. I do kind of hope that they can work it out. but family should love you no matter what. awesome chapter and I am so looking forward to more
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [4 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Realizations" from RevDorothyL
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Good on Jack, for honoring and respecting Buffy's service!

I do hope you'll be able to update again in the near future, now that you've got things moving along so promisingly, with the heart of Buffy's anger at Sam and Jacob finally revealed (and acknowledged by Sam as a genuine and pretty nearly unforgivable failing on her part).
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [4 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Realizations" from yuiop
Review:
Nice
Review By [yuiop] • Date [3 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Realizations" from Bluejello
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Glad to see you return to this story, and with a pretty heavy-hitting chapter as well!
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [3 Nov 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Realizations" from clei
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Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Realizations" from proofreader
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Frankly, it wouldn't surprise me a bit if it was found out there was actually interference/influencing being done by the Watchers Council deliberately isolating her. It's just far too convenient for them for the situation and therefore abandonment feelings on her part to make her depend more on them. It's even directly in line with Travers' attitude and actions.
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Nope, this form of child abuse Buffy was receiving from Sam and Jacob was taking place long before Watchers Council entered into the picture. They just couldn't be bothered with her.

qoute "Finally, the girl looked at her, and Sam took a step back from her eyes. They weren’t the eyes she remembered. The little girl, and, later, the adolescent, had often looked hurt and angry and upset when she saw her in person,"

Meaning little Buffy was most likely treated like crap by Sam when they were younger.
Review By [clei] • Date [3 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Realizations" from proofreader
Review:
Frankly, it wouldn't surprise me a bit if it was found out there was actually interference/influencing being done by the Watchers Council deliberately isolating her. It's just far too convenient for them for the situation and therefore abandonment feelings on her part to make her depend more on them. It's even directly in line with Travers' attitude and actions.
Review By [proofreader] • Date [3 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Realizations" from (Current Donor)Cordyfan
Review:
Great to see this story is still in progress. A lot of others based on the same challenge seem to have withered and died.

Sam can't really blame anyone but herself if Buffy decides to keep their relationship purely professional. She should at least have some inkling of how Buffy feels, given that she herself was estranged from Jacob for a while.

Thanks for writing this - I look forward to more.
Review By [(Current Donor)Cordyfan] • Date [3 Nov 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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