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Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from dreameralways
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Oh my this is awesome. I wish you would come back and finish it. It is one of the far better stories for Buffy being Sam's little sister. Please, pretty please.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [14 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from (Past Donor)exiled
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I really liked how you started this story.
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [11 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from Netchka
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All that discussion and no one ever said Haktaur (spelling right or wrong) for Buffy's strength etc. ?
Review By [Netchka] • Date [13 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from SpacedCadet
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This was an excellent start!

I'm sorry you never finished it.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
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Really is too bad this story died long ago...
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from Vickzie
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Loving the story so far, hope you update some more soon
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [17 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from bradsan
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Giles has easy talking or does he feels guilty about what he did himself. They give her away, abandoned her and never keeps tags on her. They could have easily keep an eye on Buffy without her knowing. I'm a mom. I know I would, no matter what.
I've being thinking and I came to the conclusion that Jacob isn't Dawns father. He is her granddad, because if he was her father Sam and Jacob would remember her as their sister and daughter. Sam remembers her as her niece so not logical. They made her pure out of Buffy, what makes Buffy more mother than sister. It's like giving birth to your own child, they get some DNA from their grandparents because they are family you know second degree of was it third, don't know. the Monks didn't care about a father because they didn't think it was necassary. don't get me wrong Dawn is not a clone.

Please update want to read more and all the sisters fictions are unfinished that's so frustrating.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [7 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from RandomSelection
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Hey,

I know it has been a long time since you even looked at this story, but ther's just so much potential here ... IN many other Stargate fics, Buffy and SG-1 just fit together, everybody tells all their secrets ... Buffy's bitterness is a great opportunity: Let the Carters realize their mistake, and let them work for Buffy's trust and forgivness ...

Think about an update ... please?


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Review By [RandomSelection] • Date [5 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from lilacsandroses
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I hope you come back soon, this is really a good story so far. I hope that Buffy doesn't forgive her family too soon. I would like see Buffy make the Carters work for her forgiveness.

Why does Buffy need Dawn's opinion? I never did like Dawn it just mess up the story a bit.

Will there be any pairings for Buffy? I vote for Jack because he is my favorite character and Sam has a thing for him. It would teach Sam a lesson on what could have been since she chose her career more.

It would be even more interesting if Jack discover her secret first and he would get why she is top secret.

Pretty please come back soon! :)

P.S. Merry Christmas everyone.
Review By [lilacsandroses] • Date [3 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from Blackett
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Please finish this story. It had a promising start.
Review By [Blackett] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from bradsan
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I know Jacob is Dawn father, but if Dawn loves Buffy like she claims then she will stand up for Buffy. On the other hand she was eager enough to tell Buffy she couldn't stay and had to leave, in the finals.

and I liked Buffy better when she was pissed at what they did to her. I always thought that Buffy forgives very fast much faster than in real life.

I really hope you'll give it a thought to update this one. pleaaaaaaaaaase
Review By [bradsan] • Date [10 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from SpacedCadet
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Please do more!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [9 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from (Current Donor)vidicon
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I must admit I really don't like the Carters in this...but it is very well written and I do hope you will at least finish it...or give us a grand finale of major Carter bashing...or Some sort of reconciliation...this is just too good to end here. (Rating would be higher if this were finished. Evil grin.)
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [25 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from nicjphill
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I know it's probably not going to happen but would really like you to continue this story!
Comments from author:
Well, I have a history of returning to stories after long delays and don't consider it abandoned at this point. On the other hand, I probably won't take it a real long way juts because I don't have enough Stargate background to be real comfortable writing that 'verse. I like crossover fanfics of it, but can't seem to get into the actual show:p

I do hope to at least wind it up, though.
Review By [nicjphill] • Date [9 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Super Soldiers" from Gideon
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I'm glad to see Buffy reconsidering a little about her attitude. It seemed a little unlikely that she would completely reject her blood family but forgive the scoobies who kicked her out of her own house. Dawn provides her with an excuse to back off a bit and it would be unfair to exclude Dawn from her blood family for a problem that Buffy has with them. Meanwhile SG1 has come up with a plausible (and completely wrong) explanation that makes sense to them. I hope they don't stage an intervention to get Buffy away from the NID or the drugs they must be feeding her.
I hope you can add to this again at some stage.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 May 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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