This story would work well expanded, especially if the expansion was towards turning the bit that you show here into a sort of epilogue. Specifically, if you were to write out the story of these two meeting and how the Scoobies deal with the fact that superheroes are real and want to work with them, that would be an interesting story.
Comments from author:
Thank you, that's a really good idea! I might actually do that. :)
Review By [EricThorsen] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Yes, I read the one that had the as brother and sister. But I like this better. And yes, skip the other one, especially if you're going to expand on this, which I would enjoy.
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [17 Jan 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]