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Review of chapter "Chapter Three - the earth has teeth" from Coldhands
Review:
Hmmm.
Well, you could have the mages teach the Sunnydale witches about plant-stuff (such as those little deadly seed baggies and the potion that makes them sprout and grow so fast).
You could have the Scoobies search for a way for the mages to get home while trying to protect them from the nightlife, and teach the mages how to use many of the medieval weapons around the Summers House.
AND you could have Dawn be an ambient magic mage and have Rosethorn or Briar try to teach her. I wonder what her power would be?
Hope that helps, Street Magic is my favorite out of the Circle Opens series (followed closely by Shatterglass).
Comments from author:
Your ideas are brillant, thanks for getting back to me so quickly. Those little baggies are so great, much better then mace. Dawn is the Key to me, (hey that rhymed!) but I think she must have some abillates. I hated the fact that the all powerful Joss didn't see fit to give her any.

Shatterglass is my second favorite too, because I can relate to Triss.

Do you want to write a chapter? Come on, I want to know what happens next! :)
Review By [Coldhands] • Date [9 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three - the earth has teeth" from Wolflady
Review:
Do you want ideas or do you want someone else to continue? If the former I have a few?

1. There could be a comparison the two types of magic. Tara said that healing magic was of the darkest, what would happen if they are confronted with someone who followed a different lexicon?

2. Rosethorne could be 'sent' there to help with Willows magic, or to add a divine focus to the group. Except for holy water and crosses, they seem to lose track of the notion that there are benign influences out there.

3. Xander and Briar could really hit if off (I don't necessarily mean slash), even with the difference in ages. After all, they both brought their heroes back from the dead and they both have less than optimal upbringings.
Comments from author:
Your ideas are brillant. I espiecially like the second point because I have often thought that myself. Xander and Briar would be a perfect friendship, but I don't think I can see them as a slash. The couple has to make sense to me, like Sirus/Remus, for me to like and except it.

I would like to write more, but I would gladly have anyone to add a chapter to my little project. Would you like to, a Tara point of view? I think you would be good at it.
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [9 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - A sacrifice" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Good.
Comments from author:
Okay.
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [25 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - A sacrifice" from FreakShley
Review:
I'm so glad you're making this story. Tamora Pierce is one of my favorite authors, and I've waited a long time for someone to make this crossover. Thanks. ^_^ It's a bit short now, but hopefully in time that'll be changed.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review! I once heard this quote, if you are waiting for someone to write a story, then write it yourself! That is my opinion anyway. I will try to write more. See ya!
Review By [FreakShley] • Date [14 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - A sacrifice" from periskyye
Review:
Very interesting so far! Keep it up!
Comments from author:
Okay, thank you for reviewing.
Review By [periskyye] • Date [14 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - A green magic." from Wolflady
Review:
I like it! I was disappointed that they didn't do anything about the aftermath of that episode during the series. I wonder what Briar will think of Willow magic ethics?
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I won't be able to update this story for a while, but I will try to write a nice long chapter to make up for that! I think the aftermath will be included in the nexxt couple of chapters.
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [6 Feb 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - A green magic." from Belisarius
Review:
Much better :)

Still a tad too short (but that's just my personal taste talking now), but very well written. I'm unfamiliar with Tamora Pierce, but the characters -the little we've seen so far- seem interesting. I like what I've seen so far, I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for this one to see how it develops.
Comments from author:
Briar is a differcult character, he is the first main male character by TP, and in some ways this makes him more interesting.
Review By [Belisarius] • Date [17 Jan 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - A green magic." from Belisarius
Review:
I hope something got cut off... because if you did this intentionally, expect a difficult reception here.
Comments from author:
I am sorry. Thanks for reading it, but the full chapter is now up!
Review By [Belisarius] • Date [17 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - A green magic." from Rhyssia
Review:
*peers* Either that is a very short chapter 1, or something was cut off. ;)
Comments from author:
Sorry, I was cut off! Now up and running. Go and read it, and please tell me what you think of the whole thing.
Review By [Rhyssia] • Date [17 Jan 07] • Not Rated
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