I loved the ending of your story! You have a good voice for writing Dean. I loved his comment about being secure in his masculinity. I also loved when he told her he loved her. This story was good and I hope you write some more Dean/Buffy stories.
Comments from author:
Thanks, KnightOwl. I was trying to personify Dean without becoming too Sammish, if that doesn't sound too weird, haha.
I intend to write some more Bean stories.
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [4 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from heathenseyes
Review:
I liked it, it was a nice ending to the story. Thank you for sharing it. But now I have the song "Baby it's cold outside" stuck in my head, playing over and over again. Hmmm, a story based off of the song with those two in it.. that would be mighty interesting.
And sorry it took me so long to review this, I just got home after being out for five days and this is the first time I have sat down to my computer.
Thanks again!
Comments from author:
I was thinking about the song as well when I wrote the fic, and the idea of an actual fanfiction to go along with the song went through my head. In the end I just wanted to finish this one and my homework :-). I'm not saying that in the future there won't be a Baby It's Cold Outside piece. I can so imagine Buffy and Dean in those positions.. it's so tempting! Thanks for the lovely review, heathenseyes!
Review By [heathenseyes] • Date [3 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I really like this so far. It made me laugh to think of them that way. I could definitely see Dean taking advantage of the situation and getting in bed with Buffy. I could also see Buffy having a hard time resisting him. They would make such a wonderful couple, they can both be so snarky. I hope you're planning to write more parts of this story!
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [20 Jan 07] • Not Rated
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