Noooo. They can't leave so soon. They could help and maybe get some help... and oh. all right I'll just read the next chapter.
Comments from author:
I was trying to make it short like an episode on the show, but that seems to be my mistake as no one seems to think that they should have left so quickly. I hope to have them return, someday.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 May 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Wow, this was awesome. I can actually imagine all of the Scooby gang rallying around the HP books. Maybe there could be some sort of sequel? Dawn DOES like Ron. And now that she knows how to get to the HP world, maybe she might want to escape to Hogwarts when living in a house of potentials gets to be too much. And perhaps Spike or Willow (or Anya!) could go rescue her? Anyways, great job!
Comments from author:
A sequel is in the works...*sigh* actually it's on a backburner at the moment slowly working itself to a boil that I have to pay attention to. Dawn will go back, she did afterall leave her stakes there and one must always have stakes especially if Xander's toiled away at making them. I'm really glad you liked it, and that you found their writing in the books believeable. Thank you for the wonderful review.
Review By [Matriarchick] • Date [15 Apr 07] • Not Rated
That was an extremely creative story! I have never read anything like that. You know what a great sequel to that would be? They Sunnydale team go back for vacation!! Sorry, but when an author gets the rare creative and unique idea I love to see it nurtured and used until it cries out! (In a good way!!) Keep on writing great stories and I'm going to read other fics that you wrote!
PeAcE oUt!! Megan
Comments from author:
A sequel is on the back burner at the moment, stewing. So hopefully soon. Thank you so much for your kind review, it's much apperciated.
Review By [NewDawnRising] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Very interesting. The group activity with everyone sharing and writing in Dawn's book was wonderful. Parts of this were a little choppy even considering it was intended as short, but you had some really great scenes. The Draco bleach bit will go done as one of my all time favorites.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Choppy? Guess I'll have to work on it a bit more, thanks for pointing that out. Glad you liked Draco getting teased.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [22 Jan 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]