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Review of chapter "Wishing and Hoping (then clearing up the mess)" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Another fine installment, but I have to say that I agree with the others about the chapter stuff. It would flow alot better that way.

At least she didn't faint again!

James
Comments from author:
like I said before, I think poor Willow needed to adjust to her situation, lol, and probably didn't have her space legs.


See the responses to the other reviews for my thoughts on making this one big story....

Thanks again for commenting.
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [23 Jan 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wishing and Hoping (then clearing up the mess)" from mithrilandtj
Review:
LOL God THAT was funny. I kinda wish these were chapters instead of seperate stories though.
The reading would go easier.
Comments from author:
glad you enjoyed it - might make the next story open ended, see how it works out.

Thanks for your review.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [23 Jan 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wishing and Hoping (then clearing up the mess)" from Marcel
Review:
Interesting series... however, if I can make a suggestion: I believe it would make more sense if you turned it into multiple chapters in a single story. A big problem with series (for me) is that I tend to only recommend one story from it, at the most. Also, writing five distinct reviews, one for each story, doesn't make a lot of sense. Finally, I can't track a series - I don't care about Anita Blake or Harry Potter, so I don't want to track all of your new stories; if this were an unfinished story instead, I could track that.

In any case, this was fun.
Comments from author:
i did actually think about making it a continuous story, but thought that it would have more scope as a series - allow me to go off on tangents and back and forwards within the time lines depending on inspiration.

I know what you are saying though and, rather than re posting the whole thing as a single story (though if enough people want to see it that way I might consider it) I'll leave the next story open and add to it instead. If any stories arise in the same universe, they can get posted separately to the series. Hope this will work for you.

Thanks for commenting and glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [Marcel] • Date [22 Jan 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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