I was just flipping through older stories and found this. It's got a few weird grammar things with it, but overall it was quite an enjoyable ficlet. You did a great job of getting at Anya's creative side. So many writers focus on her bluntness while overlooking her intelligence and vindictive nature. A fate at the Doublemeat Palace is so perfect for D'Hoffryn!
Review By [dulcinea] • Date [6 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Anya's Revange" from Anonymous Reviewer
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a gigglefest and a very fitting end to a most ugly man. Thanks for the laughter and the story
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [26 Jun 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Anya's Revange" from Anonymous Reviewer
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That was pure beauty, that bit of vengeance that Anya took out on D'hoffryn. Couldn't've happened to a nicer fellow. lol
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [15 Jun 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Anya's Revange" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Now, you know, I could actually have seen Anya doing something like this. It would have been a wonderful end to an episode.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [14 Jun 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Anya's Revange" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Heh heh. Wicked.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [14 Jun 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Anya's Revange" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Nice to see Anya get some of her own back. Good for D'Hoffryn, a taste of his own medicine.
I think you may have located this in the wrong category, however, since Anya isn't particularly Harry Potterish.
houses
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [13 Jun 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Anya's Revange" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Good short, but why is it under HP?
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [13 Jun 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Anya's Revange" from Anonymous Reviewer
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OMG! that was hilarius! Anya making D'Hoffern work at the Double Meat Palace. Its complete torture! I loved it. U should write a sequel where vampires complain about his smell and have a seer say he had a wacko/mixed up/messy aura, or something.
pixie
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [13 Jun 03] • Not Rated