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Review of chapter "Better Left Unsaid" from laurianna
Review:
An absolute delight! I love that you remembered those guys, Kaylee deserved to get to have their attention longer at that ball but the punchin' got in the way of that. I'm glad you had these gentlemen seeking her out; what a great follow-through. Plus, we all know she deserves the pampering they send her way. Thank you! I love that Simon doesn't know what to feel - good job having River prevent the Cap'n from saying anything. (Besides, it goes against Mal's nature to smooth things over for the Doc; Simon's just so clumsy with Kaylee, I think it's a mite bit funny to everyone on the ship, particularly Mal. I think Mal would sort of enjoy the chance to see Simon pouty out of confusion.) Thanks!
Comments from author:
She did! I just couldn't drop the idea of them keeping tabs on her and her having her own little fanclub. And it never gets old that the entire crew knows Simon is sweet on Kaylee but won't do anything about it because it's too much fun watching him bumble around! ~Ves
Review By [laurianna] • Date [26 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Better Left Unsaid" from (Recent Donor)kribby
Review:
Lovely!
Comments from author:
Awww....*blushes* thanks so much! ~Ves
Review By [(Recent Donor)kribby] • Date [24 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Better Left Unsaid" from (Current Donor)jedibuttercup
Review:
Delightful! I can definitely see those men Kaylee was talking to wanting advice from her afterward, too, and of course River would signal Mal not to curb her brother's jealousy! *grins*
Comments from author:
I totally think those men wouldn't let Kaylee just disappear off into space again. Where else are they going to find such good help? :D ~Ves
Review By [(Current Donor)jedibuttercup] • Date [24 Jan 07] • Not Rated
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