Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from moldavia
Well, that was a good read, good stuff, keep it up!
Review By [moldavia
] • Date [24 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from nerfherder
A lovely tail that fully explores the interactions between the scoobs and SG1. Good work!
Review By [nerfherder
] • Date [28 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from jujukittychick
very cool, poor jack, stuck with a borderline schizo xander (though i really liked tea'lc's take on him) an angry spike and willow babble lol very nice job with this :D
Review By [jujukittychick
] • Date [12 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jujukittychick
"Spike was just... Spike." lmao well doesnt' that just say it all. interesting start to this, loved willow and carter going all geeky with each other too
Review By [jujukittychick
] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Gideon
Cool story. I liked how you wrote the relationships between the characters and I'm not suprised that Jack had trouble figuring them out. Xander and Spike trying to save the world and not kill each other were very funny. I hope Willow learns some stuff from Carter and maybe a bit of self confidence too, without getting too arrogant.
I agree with Teal'c, they will choose to be allies, with the world at stake what other choice do they have?
Review By [Gideon
] • Date [9 Jun 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from serenityselena
well ... that was quite an adventure for our heroes ....
glad to see the made it back and are now safe and sound ^_^
Review By [serenityselena
] • Date [12 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from leelaa
(Xander:)"Oh … shit…I should have called in to work, but I just figured we would either win or there wouldn’t be a boss left to care." Jack almost laughed at the strange mixture of apocalyptic and mundane concerns. He could relate. Of course, he hadn’t gotten that jaded until after several years in special ops.
...even Daniel didn't miss the threat in that growl. The hairs on Jack's arm didn't just stand up, they stood up, saluted, and went to parade rest.
Review By [leelaa
] • Date [24 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Godogma
Wow, I can certainly say that I definitely don't like this story. Your portrayal of Xander is even worse than the feminazi version that the idiot writer kept portraying when the show strapped on rocketskates and headed downhill for the shark jumping with the whole slap fight with Harmony of all things.
I read 11 chapters of this before I came to the incontrovertible conclusion that this was too fucked in the head for my tastes - Xander worshiping Spike? Good fucking luck with that, also good luck convincing me that the wraith are somehow immune to weapons or getting their throats ripped out by vampiric fangs that leave a huge hole in Buffy. Demonic vamps leave great big holes... not pinpricks.
Multiple personality disorders? Wow... I didn't like anything in the show after season 3 and various singular episodes afterward. Congratulations sir, you jumped the shark just as thoroughly as the writer who aided Joss in jumping it.
Review By [Godogma
] • Date [18 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from SusanAnthony
I really enjoyed this story!
Review By [SusanAnthony
] • Date [23 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Ansku
Good one :)
Review By [Ansku
] • Date [8 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Mari
For some reason, I only recently found this, but I'm very glad I did. Things I particularly liked: The effort you put into having Xander and Willow speak with their usual unusual pattern. The dimension diversion that turned out to be a simple planet problem. The slighty erratic way you have Xander and Willow behaving; they're a weird combination of overly mature and strangely immature, and that rings completely true for me. I also like the treaty sest up you've decided on at the end.
This must be slightly AU? At least, that's the impression I'm getting from the Xander-Spike relationship.
Review By [Mari
] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from DeepBlueJoy
That was a really great story, and I was so glad to find that they were all from the same universe... I believe that they'll do major world saveage in time to come...
Review By [DeepBlueJoy
] • Date [1 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from SpacedCadet
I like it, tho it is a bit curious that Spike was OK in direct sunlight when they were in their own universe.
Comments from author:
I"m glad you enjoyed it, but every sun has a slightly different composition. There's no evidence about WHAT in the sun makes them go 'poof' but I imagine not all stars would have it.
Review By [SpacedCadet
] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from lucidity
This is fantastic. Very enjoyable, well written, good characterizations, blah, blah, I wonder sometimes if I'm this good. Doubt it.
Great job - looking forward to the next in the series!
Review By [lucidity
] • Date [1 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from FoundSerenity
I Loved the Drama and the humor of your Story But I would like to see pairings if you continue and make it a series. KEEP WRITING!!!
Review By [FoundSerenity
] • Date [6 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]