One of the items on the what not to write list for crossovers is don't have the link be a familial relationship between one or more of the main characters. Fortunately this 'rule' is broken frequently. Also fortunately you never got to see this list.
I was expecting a Weasley, but the one you used was unexpected. The characterization was fantastic, especially considering the length of the fic. Short, sweet, and actually a complete scene. Don't let anyone kid you writing short is easy, writing short and complete is not.
Please keep writing.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [27 Jan 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Very well done. A nice take on the red haired brigade connection. Poor Willow, does she know what she's in for, I wonder. Perhaps you could continue the storyline further. Short, succinct oneshots are rare and you've executed it well. Thank you for sharing.
Regards,
Avidreader.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for the great review you left.I'll think about your idea.
Review By [avidreader] • Date [27 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]