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Review of chapter "Chapter 12 - The Crossing." from (Past Donor)Skyefather
Review:
I'M ENJOYING the story so far and hope you update soon(hint hint plzplzplz)I'm a big Buffy and Eddings fan so this fic is now my fav. just got 1 question has willow gotten an amulet(silver all sorceresses should have 1) yet or will that be made by her great grandfather. also why didn't willow hear/feel the rushing noise of polgara using the will and the word?

thx great story but please continue
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11 - The First Clash" from grd
Review:
I must applaud your work. Writing this crossover is very difficult and your continued work is testament to that fact. Edding's verse is not the easiest to write about but somehow you are writing a very engaging tale that is full of surprise and intrigue. Eagerly looking forward to more. Thank you.
Comments from author:
About all I can really do or say in reply to this is grin stupidly and thank you.
Well, that and get more -good- chapters up, of course.
Review By [grd] • Date [21 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 - A stab in the dark." from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Excellent
Comments from author:
Thanks!
And, despite all appearances, neither the story or myself are dead. I've done a fair bit of the next chapter, and it should be finished and up withn a week at most. Really, this time.
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [3 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7 - Shadowed Woods" from LordCorwin
Review:
wow .. very well done .. a few typo's here and there, along with some 'grammatical' errors .. but all in all, well done.
Comments from author:
Typos? Thanks. I'll fix 'em when I put the next chapter up. Thanks!
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [3 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7 - Shadowed Woods" from Brightly
Review:
very very interesting. seems inline with the 'verse from what i remember as well.

and this might be a bit premature but i think i'm shipping willow/ferret. i have a soft spot in my heart for drasnians.
Comments from author:
Who doesn't? Drasnians are just sooo much fun!
Review By [Brightly] • Date [2 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - Ocean Dreams." from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Good.
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [9 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - Ocean Dreams." from Brightly
Review:
interesting. my only question is when this occurs in relationship to the buffyverse which i suspect will become clearer as the story progresses
Comments from author:
It will, trust me, even though I've not updated yet. Things will be made clear. Slowly, but things are being seen from Willow's perspective.
Review By [Brightly] • Date [9 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Setting Sail" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
normaly i am no friend of willow (never liked that control bitch) but thats a nice story
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [21 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Setting Sail" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Great chapter.
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [21 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Setting Sail" from purrfus
Review:
Great work with Eddings, and Willow. The frogs were a lovely touch.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [21 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 - Discussion" from Wormbait
Review:
Very well done so far, definately has the feel of the books to it as well.

Looking forward to more and thanx for sharing.
Review By [Wormbait] • Date [11 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 - Discussion" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Good.
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [11 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 - Discussion" from physicsteach
Review:
Nice chapter. Fun to read, and definitely in Eddings' style. You did manage to paste it twice, though.

Also, your formatting is a bit off: you're leaving out a blank line after some paragraphs, especially one that are only a single line. It's a bit awkward for the reader.
Comments from author:
Yes ... I noticed that almost as soon as I put the chapter up.
It's been corrected now, I hope.
Review By [physicsteach] • Date [11 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 - Recovery" from purrfus
Review:
Re-read from the beginning. The story is flowing smoothly. Its much easier to appreciate the character details etc - really like Willow's attraction to the library. Eddings style is unique - probably one of the reasons his work isn't used as ofter as so many others - you've done a great job crossing over the styles.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [7 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 - Recovery" from Xocoatldreams
Review:
Very, very interesting. I'm a major Eddings fan and I love crossovers with his books (though there aren't that many), so I'm glad someone decided to do a well-written one. Can't wait to see where this goes
Review By [Xocoatldreams] • Date [7 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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