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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
Review:
I am really hoping this story is not ending in the dead file. I really love the twist on themes and look forward to seeing where it will go.
Fire
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [22 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
Review:
I am really hoping this story is not ending in the dead file. I really love the twist on themes and look forward to seeing where it will go.
Fire
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [22 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from Glumski
Review:
Wow, this is exceptional. I'm not sure I've ever read a more emotional crossover. The dynamic of this story is absolutely great, always keeping us in suspense and completely enthralled. There sure are a few errors (mostly grammar and spelling) in the first few chapters but they pale in comparison to the pure awesomeness that is this plot and especially the characters' relations.
I really like what you did with the Willow thing; both from Buffy's dreams and the 'real life' situations her behaviour seems suspicous without declaring her either a concerned friend or a snaked manipulative antagonist. It fits very well with the general pacing of the plot and the overall uncertainty of what might really be going on. The characters also seem very lifelike and vivid; I especially liked that routine Xander, Dawn and the others used on Buffy and how it affected them.

So... very well done so far! Thanks for posting this and I hope you're still going to update! I also wouldn't mind prereading or beating or whatever if you're still looking for somebody.
Review By [Glumski] • Date [20 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
Review:
This really needs an update. The idea of it is facinating and I love to see when the scoobies get help for a change.
Comments from author:
I don't have the energy to write fanfiction and then have to defend my plot choices to other fans. Its much easier to just write what I want for a few friends, than to put up with some of the nut-jobs on this website. I don't mind constructive comments, I just get tired of the people who want everything their way and then clog the airways pouting when they don't get it.

If you are still interested in the story, let me know and I will PM you when the story has been completed and send you a copy.

Thank you for your review and thank you for all your stories. I truly enjoy a lot of your writing.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [20 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from lateVMlover
Review:
I really enjoy your story. I started reading it before I realized you'd basically abandoned it. I hope you get some inspiration. It's a creative and intriguing story.
Comments from author:
Its not really abandoned so mush as I don't have the energy to write fanfiction and then have to defend my plot choices to other fans. Its much easier to just write what I want for a few friends, than to put up with some of the nut-jobs on this website. I don't mind constructive comments, I just get tired of the people who want everything their way and then clog the airways pouting when they don't get it.

If you are still interested in the story, let me know and I will PM you when the story has been completed and send you a copy.
Review By [lateVMlover] • Date [14 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from locard
Review:
This is a great story and a different turn on Buffy and SG1 inter-actions. I do hope you will post again soon.
Review By [locard] • Date [7 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from Genuka
Review:
*HAHAHAHA!!!!* Wonderful tale! I look forward to the next update! you know I wouldn't be at all surprised if Daniel and Buffy accidentally got married while they were "dead". *snicker* Might be more of a reason why Daniel isn't married after the mess with Shar'e
Review By [Genuka] • Date [8 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from LordSchmodder
Review:
I like!
Thank you!
Comments from author:
You are welcome! Thanks for the review!!!
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [3 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from clarityfades
Review:
Great meeting between O'Neill & Buffy! Loved Nancy saying Buffy wasn't the boss of her. I wonder what is up with the new slayers--were they sent by Xander or Willow? & is Willow possessed by a snake or just on a power trip (like season 6)? Can't wait to find out!
Comments from author:
Ugh. I need t0 do a better job of writing this story.

1) The UN/IOA requested a briefing from the new Council and the Council requested a briefing from Stargate Command.
2) Willow had to leave the briefing early to search for an artifact. Buffy had to leave early to support some of Riley's guys while they hunted for a demon.
3) Within days of returning to Cleveland Buffy started having The Ole' Dream of Death.
4) The Council found Willow and she returned to London. Where she concocted a potion that at first blocked the dream and allowed Buffy (and others) to rest up to 12 hours. The more the potion was used the less well it worked until Buffy was just going from waking to the dream to waking to the dream.
5) When Buffy the dream became life threatening from the lack of eating and rest, Xander called Giles about General O'Neill and the Stargate Command helping. Giles refused.
6) Giles asked Xander to take Buffy's blood and Fed-Ex it to London so Willow and the Coven could check to see if it was a spell of some kind.
7) Giles went to Cleveland.
8) Giles freaked out about Buffy's decline.
9) Over the phone Willow reported that the coven and Willow did not discover any magical cause for Buffy's condition.
10) Buffy overheard the conversation about the lack of a spell and tried to escape so she could die fighting.
11) The baby slayers of the Cleveland house found Buffy. Xander yelled at Giles if he didn't call O'Neill then he would.
12) Giles called the President, who called Hammond, who called O'Neill.
13) They transported Buffy, Giles, and three slayers as bodyguards to the SGC so that Janet could treat Buffy.
14) When Buffy's bond with the other slayers was important, Janet she asked for a total of 12 Slayers to come help Buffy.
15) Giles asked for 9 senior slayers during a call with Xander. Xander can not spare the extra senior slayers, so he sends the newest slayers. The first two will arrive shortly.
16) That night Buffy had The Dream except it had changed to a slayer dream, she was/is just too confused to figure anything out.
17) When Giles gets to Buffy's hospital Silo, he saw magic as the cause of Buffy's dream/ condition.
18) When Daniel touched Buffy, he began to remember some, very little, of his time ascended.
19) The Magic of the dream was canceled when Daniel touched Buffy.
20) Jack finds out that the snaked Kinsey is working with the NID
21) Jack finds out that the NID was the Initiative and that Kinsey had ties to the NID.

I hope this clears things up. Thank you for sticking with the story despite my bad writing.
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [3 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Lovely to get an O'Neill-intensive chapter! :)
Comments from author:
I think O'Neill is one of my all time favorite characters. I also think that besides Willow, he is the best match for Buffy. However, I love the idea of Daniel with Buffy, too.

Thank you again for your support of this story!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
yay update and yay that you are getting the hang of your new computer. I get the feeling the General is very much hoping Buffy and the girls will be able to sense aliens. It would be a tremendous help for the SGC to get some slayers on team and even more so if they could sense the snakeheads. Still makes me want to write even though everything I write lately seems to suck. : ( ever since I lost my notes when my computer crashed. but maybe if you keep it up it will inspire me to write and it won't suck. : ) here is hoping.
Comments from author:
If there is anything at all that I can do to help you get back on the writing horse, then please ask. Since I can't line edit, because of my dyslexia, I would be happy to be a prereader for you.

I also seriously doubt that anything you write "sucks." But if it does, then that is why you let other people read things and point out the flaws. You are one of my favorite writers, either Professional or Fanfiction, and I really want to know how some of your stories will end.

Finally, since I just lost all my notes, I had to reread my stories and I discovered that my notes were outdated.

As one of my writing heroes Holly Lisle says: Write NOW!

Until then, thank you so much for reviewing my story! As you know reviews really help us be motivated to write.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from HMaxMarius
Review:
Oh hoooo... And the plot thickens...

Soooo... now we suspect that a certain scoob has been snakified... of course said scoob is travelling with slayers... sooo, have said slayers also been snakified? and if not is it the snake using the scoobs memory alteration spells or some other form of mind control on them...

=D
Comments from author:
Um, ah, no comment?

LOL

Seriously, I really can't comment. Other than to thank you so much for your review. Your speculation has been a real shot in the arm for me and made my entire day!

Again, thank you.
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from fayefree
Review:
Just love the interaction of Jack and Janet. Boy is he going to get it. Janet never forgets.
Comments from author:
I think I see a big honking needle in Jack's immediate future.

I love Jack and the fact that he would let a junior officer get away with what Janet does without rancor.
Review By [fayefree] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from clarityfades
Review:
Love this story. Great update! Hope Windows 8 starts treating you right.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I am getting better at handling Windows 8, thank goodness!
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [25 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from BotticellisMuse
Review:
This is one of the stories i'm keeping track of and it's been awhile. Thanks for the update and pls do keep it coming!
Comments from author:
Thanks for hanging in there! It has been a while. I am hoping to continue it to the end.
Review By [BotticellisMuse] • Date [25 Feb 13] • Not Rated
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