This is one neat story! The pace, the ferocity, the action! It has it all.
First of all, I loved that you chose Cuddy to be a slayer, not one of the younger characters. And I loved how she tries to control her impulses for years, but the slayer is still there. Also, Faith really was the right girl to contact Cuddy; I think they'd connect really well.
Though the story works well as a one-shot, a sequel would be most welcome. Just saying.
Review By [Arashi] • Date [4 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I adore this story... it's incredibly well written and quite a shock - most people would make Cameron or someone the Slayer, cause she's all young and pretty. I love the fact that it's Cuddy.
I just wish it wasn't over... the writing had me thoroughly captivated. Wonderful job.
-Tamora, the Cardboard Moon
Review By [WriteTheGoodWrite] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This whole take on how someone professional and educated who has authority would *deal* with the dreams and the strength was very well done and very interesting.
You do realise that a continuation of this would be a lot of fun? ;)
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [1 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]