Just a general critism about all your stories. Why don't you write longer ones? These 100-200 word drabbles hardly have anything happen in them. And when something does, it's quickly passed over. No chartarization, no drama, no depth. Franlkly you might as well be spamming TTH with all the indivual 'stories'. Can you at least gather them up into groups and post several drabbles as a single story? That way over half of the 'latest' page isn't filled with these.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [2 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SGC Orientation III" from manic
Review:
ROFLMAO! Loved the nicknames. And that a Green man with little red horns walks into the office, and Daniel actually continues the interview. Then he signs for said Green man with little red horns.
Fred/Illyria carrying a recently nekkid Wesley back home through the Stargate? Lovely mental picture!
(Though, would Fred still have become Illyria, and therefore capable of carrying Wesley any distance, if they'd all gone to work for the SGC instead of W&H at the end of Season 4?)
Comments from author:
Don't know. I didn't think of that when I wrote that in a half hour at 2AM. Possibly.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [18 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "SGC Orientation III" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Awwww...! Love Danny's choice of music.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [22 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "SGC Orientation III" from Duskie
Review:
I hope you continue this into a story. I'd really love to know how Daniel handled Oz's lack of weirded outness at strange stuffs.
Review By [Duskie] • Date [8 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "SGC Orientation III" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [26 Feb 07] • Not Rated
