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Review of chapter "Five, the epilogue" from BrownFinderth
Another fine piece of writing!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [12 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five, the epilogue" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
I love this series more and more after each part :)
Comments from author:
So did I as I wrote it. Thanks for keeping reading. :D
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [10 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five, the epilogue" from (Past Donor)sopchoppy
Another Great story in the series, nice pacing and writing.
Review By [(Past Donor)sopchoppy] • Date [19 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of story "That Seasonal Spirit" from Chaseherchiss
First I wanted to address your comment/response to my last review, about you ruining the first season of VM for me! It is because of your story that I am even watching the show (Gave back my loaner copy and bought my own copy of season one as of Sunday Woot Woot) so no worries about the ruining, you have converted, stand proud!

Second, I have to admit to being a little bit lost on this last chapter. I apparently haven't gotten far enough into the series to know who Liam Fitzpatrick is and why Buffy got so wigged!

However, I followed it enough to state without doubt of any kind that it was as always extremely well written, and gave me more V/B togetherness and that is never a bad thing LOL!

So who killed Santy Claws? (I know it's not that easy but a girls gotta try!)

Comments from author:
Oh well, awesome. That makes me feel better. :-)

And yeah, you'll meet Liam in Season 2....and you'll find out why Veronica isn't her usual self when he's around, too...

Glad you liked it, though. You're right--it isn't that easy. ;-)
Review By [Chaseherchiss] • Date [3 Apr 07] • Rating [8 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of story "That Seasonal Spirit" from zigpal
great update. Got a couple of half wits there wanting to start something with the slayer, dumbasses. I can't wait to see where you take our girls next.
Comments from author:
Thanks, zig. :-)
Review By [zigpal] • Date [2 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of story "That Seasonal Spirit" from CPTSkip
Huh? For some reason my review didn't transmit. OK, let me try again.

I liked this update, but it wasn't one of my favorites because there wasn't enough B&V interaction. And I don't mean sex! OK, I don't mean JUST sex. I'm sorry Kendall was killed in this time-line also. I alway liked her, even if she was a money grubbing, sexually rapacious, beautiful beyond belief goddess. Or maybe it was just because she looked like Cordy. Lol! I would have loved to see Liam Turned so Buffy could have dusted him without that old 'We can't kill him because he has a soul' problem stopping her. He is one Bad Dude. Still loving your story and now, as always, I want more. Lol!
Comments from author:
Thanks. There should be some more B/V in the next chapter, but the point of this is them on a case, being forced to address things they promised to around Thanksgiving. So I'm juggling trying to write a somewhat mini-BtVS/VM "episode," with that stuff in there, too.

I don't know what I've gotten myself into...
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [2 Apr 07] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of chapter "Five, the epilogue" from CPTSkip
Lol! I think I laughed the whole time I was reading your wonderful update. I was going to mention a few of my favorite lines, but then realized I would just be repeating your entire story, so I won't. I am continually impressed with how perfectly you have captured both B's and V's voices. I can so clearly see and hear the characters in my mind as I read, it is darn near scary. You haven't made any deals with dudes in red outfits have you? And I don't mean Sanity Claws. Great update, but now I want more! Sob!
Comments from author:
Hehe. Thanks. Hope you like Six. :=)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [26 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five, the epilogue" from Chaseherchiss
I have decided that the "Cliffhanger," is one of the most evil creations on earth!

Great chapter! I am still a VM newbie (I have only started watching season 1), but you so have her voice down. You have also got Buffy's character locked down tight. Beyond the interaction between the two main characters, you have built a solid foundation for them in their friend/family base that really helps this story stand out.

Kudo's to you!

Comments from author:
You just started Season 1? That means I've ruined it for you already. Aw, damn. It's quite the ride.

But thanks as per usual, Chase. :-)
Review By [Chaseherchiss] • Date [26 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five, the epilogue" from zigpal
another great installment. Hmm girls night in, they could invire Faith that way Parker wouldn't feel like a fifth wheel plus imagine the fun she would add to truth or don't. continue soon
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Review By [zigpal] • Date [25 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five, the epilogue" from DigiEmissary
The Christmas Vacation monologue was so awesome. :D
Comments from author:
Thanks. :-) It seemed like a very "Buffy and Veronica" thing to do.
Review By [DigiEmissary] • Date [25 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Four" from Chaseherchiss
The sheer volume of pop culture you impart into each section of this wonderful story boggles the mind.

I enjoyed this chapter the most out of all of the other chapters you have written. The first part with Angel was really nice. I have longed for an Angel/Veronica scene since reading your first B/V story, "Summer In Neptune." Veronica and Buffy play so much together and well together that it is sometimes hard to figure out how serious they are with regard to anything in their lives/relationship.

Which brings me to the end with Veronica becoming serious and asking Buffy to share more with her. That amount of serious was the perfect balance for these two and you did it wonderfully.

More if/when you can please!!! Chase
Comments from author:
Thanks, Chase. M'glad.

Yeah, with this chapter I wanted to have an Angel/Veronica scene, and "Pangs" allowed for it, which is the other reason I set it when I set it, and also to show that underneath all the playfulness, Buffy and Veronica do care a lot about one another.

Which I hope Veronica's reaction to Buffy's wound and the final scene illustrated. But like you said, it's about keeping a balance.

I hope to continue that more in Chapter 5 and beyond...
Review By [Chaseherchiss] • Date [22 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Four" from CPTSkip
I love your story. I can't believe how well the two main characters fit together and how their banter amuses me. Actually, your dialog is so cool, I sometime have to read it two or three times to catch everything going on. Too fraking cool. More, please? I need the chuckles and laughs and the girls need the smoochies. Lol!
Comments from author:
Thanks muchly. I'll certainly try my best. :-D
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [22 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Four" from zigpal
great update. Good to see Veronica and Angel get their issues put to rest, and I really like the kitchen scene with Buffy and Veronica and the 'nerve damage'. I'm interested to see what Mac and Willow's project is. continue soon
Comments from author:
Thanks, zig. :=)
Review By [zigpal] • Date [22 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three" from zigpal
great update. Weevil killing Spike was nice. I'm not sure I like where the ending is leading, but I guess we'll wait and see.
Comments from author:
Thanks. :-)

Where do you think it's leading?
Review By [zigpal] • Date [14 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three" from Chaseherchiss
My favorite pairing, and you write them so well
Glad to see Xanders out from under that spell
Buffy got skewered, and Weeville fried Spike
He was right, Faith would look good riding a bike

A proud P.I., and a very butch ending
I just hope Angel caught the message she's sending!
The dialogue was spot on, the laughs were there too
I really love this story, and hope your not through.

I know writing's tough, but you do it so well
We're wrapped round your finger, we're under your spell
So don't leave us hanging, more when you can
To you wonderful author, from a rhyme crazy fan
Comments from author:
I'm very impressed by your rhyming. lol. Thanks for taking the time to think it up. And reading, of course.
Review By [Chaseherchiss] • Date [14 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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