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Review of chapter "In two days" from Lirana
The Ministry(s) of Magic were formed with the creation of the Magical Secrecy Act or w/e back in 1698+-2 IIRC the Watcher's Council is an offshoot/descendant of the Shadow Men(?) who made the First Slayer back in ...5000 BC? the dawn of time or whenever. Kinda don't think that the WC could be younger than the MoM. maybe the other way around though... if you make WC like that pretty sure Bad Things would happen to the BtVS Lore. and didn't a whole bunch of Watchers off themselves in 1680 because they though the Twilight Prophecy was going to be fulfilled or something?
Review By [Lirana] • Date [27 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "De-Ja Vu" from mithrilandtj
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [11 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In two days" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Cool. I'm worried about where Harry is, confused about the memory loss, wondering where Draco's true allegiances lie and whether he is going to hook up with Hermoine or Dawn or nobody... I'm hoping that the potion that killed Harry was intentionally tampered with to maim/kill, but also that he was in no way the intended target ;)

I wouldn't be surprised if the weird energy drain from Hermoine mixed with the influences from the Key and Harry and resulted in Dawn waking up from her coma with the ability to use wizarding spells and walk through the regular access wards without 'physical' contact with Harry.

I'm also really curious how the PTB managed to cloak Harry's ghost from the others... Maybe it's just that he's existing on a completely separate immaterial plane than the Hogwarts' ghosts.

Neville's parents are insane now? Hmm, I'm curious if they could see the Key's green glowiness that surrounds Dawn and - possibly - surrounds Harry as well.

In short, a cool story and I'm looking forward to seeing more :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [6 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "With a yellow border" from mithrilandtj
And just what was that Reveal spell SUPPOSED to do?

What's with the memory loss? Does it have something to do with the Key?
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [7 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dicho Inter Amicus" from Clandestine
Uh-oh...LOL...can't wait to see what'll happen now!
Review By [Clandestine] • Date [7 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Visions of Nothingness" from Ishi
Please, oh please, oh please write more soon! I want more!!! *whimpers* Please?
Review By [Ishi] • Date [22 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Visions of Nothingness" from mithrilandtj
Damn. Good story.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [30 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Visions of Nothingness" from KatieKat
Hey I'm loving this story please update again soon

Review By [KatieKat] • Date [19 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Visions of Nothingness" from Clandestine
Great story!
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Review By [Clandestine] • Date [31 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not going unnoticed" from arkeus
Nice so far, though this is slowly turning into a "slytherins are misunderstood" fic, which is rarely well done :/ Mustn't forget that they are people trained to hate and feel superior since their infancy, and if it gets better, it takes decades to show :p
Comments from author:
Yes, but they are also trained to treat their fellow Slytherins better than the rest. Just wait and see.

And thanks for the review.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [1 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not going unnoticed" from Madam
I think this story has a lot going for it. It doesn't ever get boring and the characters are doing what they would do in any paricular situation you throw them into and not just what you would like them to do.

I would like to see what kind of relationship malfoy has, if any, with hermione after spending part of the summer recovering at the wesleys. But if that doesn't tie into the story fair enough.

As for Dawns not going unnoticed I agree- she wouldn't. Not after the intro to the gang and everything.

Update soon!
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Review By [Madam] • Date [20 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not going unnoticed" from (Past Donor)Aomizuoko
Hm, it was confusing at first, but I still like it. :) I think you should make the chapters longer though. Please continue, I wonder if Draco is gonna figure out about Harry. Wouldn't that be funny? I also like that you put Dawn in slytherin instead of gryfindore, appealing to her sneaky side rather than her other side. I also wonder who she called, that was a cellphone right? Man, wouldn't it be funny if one of t he scoobies found her, and burst straight into the castle...though that'd have to be willow. OHH!!!! She could be pissed willow! like the evil one! Anyhow, good story, keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Sorry, Dawn wasn't using a cell phone, she was talking to Harry but the others couldn't see who she was talking to so she just looked crazy.

Thanks for the review. I'm a little stuck with the story, I've drawn up an outline but I think that has gone out that window now.
Review By [(Past Donor)Aomizuoko] • Date [13 Apr 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "An Introduction" from (Past Donor)halfbloodpuffskin
Yes! I'm so glad
This tale will continue
It's really too bad,
The trials of our ingenue!

Interesting story
Can't wait to read more!
Will Tom kill his quarry?
Or will Dawn even the score?

I guess what I'm saying
Is that, in this tale's fate,
Not content with just slaying,
The Key will desimate!

(response to response: Glad I could help! The world needs more bloody awful poetry, neh?)
Comments from author:
lol! Thanks for the review and the really awfull poem. It always makes me feel better when someone makes up a really rotten poem for my benefit! (Actually it was very nice of you and I will treasure this!!) Thanks again!
Review By [(Past Donor)halfbloodpuffskin] • Date [15 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Introduction" from mithrilandtj
I like this series. I keep wondering when the Scoobies will track her down.
Spike's been around for 150 years or so and I'm fairly sure he would know about the Wizarding World. He'll find his "Bit"
Update soon!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [5 Feb 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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