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Review of chapter "Nowhere Kids" from thundever
Review:
Great fic, brilliant idea and way to bring Ben into the Winchester family, please continue with it.
Comments from author:
Sorry, but this is a one-shot and complete. Glad you liked it though and thank you for taking the time to review.
Review By [thundever] • Date [9 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nowhere Kids" from (Past Donor)SwimTeam
Review:
Really great, so interesting I think it was a truly creative way to save Ben and bring "Dean" into the the Winchester family.
Rory:)
Comments from author:
Thank you! I am rather proud of how this particular story turned out.
Review By [(Past Donor)SwimTeam] • Date [21 Jun 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nowhere Kids" from banner
Review:
I'd forgotten how much I loved this little ficlet. You have done a great job with mood and characterization.
Comments from author:
Thank you! Ben needed someone who could be a stable influence. Hopefully this time around he doesn't murder people to offer their teeth up to the Blue Lady.
Review By [banner] • Date [16 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nowhere Kids" from VivianCaidin
Review:
Hopefully you have a continuation in mind for this story.

I can imagine the changes to Poco Loco due to the Winchester influence.

Hope to read it soon.
Review By [VivianCaidin] • Date [14 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nowhere Kids" from Xayian
Review:
Dude, if you ever considered taking this further, I would so be there. :D
Review By [Xayian] • Date [29 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nowhere Kids" from alexceasar
Review:
very nice. Continue this please.
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [1 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nowhere Kids" from (Past Donor)SwimTeam
Review:
I am glad you saved Ben. I think you did it in a plausible way too. Nice job. :)
Review By [(Past Donor)SwimTeam] • Date [24 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nowhere Kids" from (Moderator)Demona
Review:
I've never really watch Dark Angel, but since you wrote this I'm going to give it a try :)

Hmm, so Ben escaped the compound when he was a child - in your verse? That is interesting. And John picked him up - and I'm assuming kept him.

Very neat. Is there going to be any more to this verse?

Again, your descriptions were just wonderful.

And John! Oh you had John!!
Review By [(Moderator)Demona] • Date [8 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nowhere Kids" from banner
Review:
That was marvelous. You left me feeling warmed and full of hope. Thank you.
Review By [banner] • Date [24 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nowhere Kids" from (Past Donor)Krisztina
Review:
Oh Ava my sweetie~
I simply loved this. It's like a huge sigh of relief, really. From the network airing of Pollo Loco, I was moved by the tragedy of Ben--one of the saddest victims of Manticore's machinations and a total lack of parental guidance, imho. I'm so glad you've reconciled that for me in this story.

As always, your imagery was mind-blowing. Standouts were:

"His heart pulsed as the sound of gunfire and men swarmed his senses, nostrils flaring he shoved the card back into the waistline of his underwear. Welcomed the slight irritation of its placement before he pushed away from the tree and leapt back into the night."

This was so fantastic! I never would have thought of the irritation being a welcome thing. You amaze me with your cleverness sometimes. Really. You so do.

"Ben’s eyes widened, the pupils forming twin black holes in the center of a delicately boned face and he pressed his back into the rough bark."

With one sentence, I saw him and felt what it was to be him, both senses seemlessly drawing me into the story in different ways. All I can say is... whoa.

"Ben’s lips thinned, eyes darting over his large frame and his shoulders rolled back, weight distributing evenly on the balls of his feet as the man moved toward him. Hazel eyes watched him warily a frown pulling the man’s dark brows down as he stepped forward."

I thought this was the start of something really remarkable, too. Loved the way the two soldiers sized each other up in this section of the story.

As for criticism, all I can come up with is hat it was over far too soon.

Thanks so much for posting this.

Big hugs! sita:)
Review By [(Past Donor)Krisztina] • Date [12 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nowhere Kids" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Excellent way of building on the fact that Jensen Ackles played both Ben (and his clone/twin Alec) and Dean Winchester. Plus, this alternate history would give Ben/Dean a slightly healthier focus for his obsession with the supernatural! Excellent work.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [7 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nowhere Kids" from Lisette
Review:
Strangely enough, when reading the description for this story, the reference to the Blue Lady reminded me of a recent episode of ER. It took me quite a while to place the reference with Dark Angel, and even longer for me to connect Jensen Ackles with the poor little boy that turns into a psychopath - as opposed to his quirky twin, Alec. Nonetheless, I liked this little AU - an alternate way for Dean to join up with the Winchesters, in a world vastly different from the one that canon places them in. Nicely done.
Review By [Lisette] • Date [7 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nowhere Kids" from lyc
Review:
Sorry I misread it, but I still loved the story
Review By [lyc] • Date [7 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nowhere Kids" from lyc
Review:
OMG!
(btw you listed this under Ava centered, i don't know if that was on purpose)
Review By [lyc] • Date [7 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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