Great Story. You really do great work with all the character interaction, it certainly feels real enough, the jokes, the teasing and the underlying emotions. I can't believe that this story only got four reviews so far, so i decided to let you know that you do a really good job with this fic. Looking forward to more SamxRodney goodness.
Comments from author:
Thank you :-) This is my first story in this fandom so I haven't attracted many readers yet - lets hope that changes in the future.
Review By [Ishikawa] • Date [19 Feb 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
This story looks really good. Some parts seem to go too fast. I can't wait for more!!!
Comments from author:
Don't worry, the action slows down a bit as the chapters go on. Weirdly enough, I think that was a side-effect of actually having a drawn out plan of what the story plot was; there was zero room for the characters to go off on their own tangents :-)
Review By [NumberFive] • Date [9 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Thanks! SGA and SG1 is a new departure for me, so I'm a bit worried about playing with the characters. Chapter one seems a bit stiff, even to me, but I don't know how to change it. I'm more pleased with chapter two..and you can tell I'm nervous about this story, can't you?
*Grins*
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [9 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
