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Review of chapter "Epilogue part 2" from Blackett
Review:
Great story.
Review By [Blackett] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue part 2" from leelaa
Review:
Thanks for a great read. :)
Review By [leelaa] • Date [10 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue part 2" from serenityselena
Review:
awesome story ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [12 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue part 2" from lucyferr
Review:
“They want to watch us until we go bad again, they don’t trust us…and I don’t think that they should.”

whoa... talk about precocious...

it was a good thing that three former-Initiative soldiers had taken it upon themselves to speak up for Willow and Chris, defending them at every direction.
Riley Finn, his wife Samantha and Graham Miller were friends of Willow’s group and were also demon-hunters; they, along with SG1, Hammond and a few others, had managed to convince the Joint Chiefs and the President to not hold them accountable for their actions.

Wondered about that...
Comments from author:
Chris is the child of Daniel and Willow; no one would expect any different :)

They do need some sort of protection, even if they are witches

thanks for the review!
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 24" from lucyferr
Review:
Not just the demons…no THEY were meant to be evil, they were made that way…a lot of them had no choice, it was just in their nature. Like tigers to fawns, they were the hunters because that was all they knew.
But, humans…no, they had their free will, they came into the world with souls and they still committed worse atrocities than even the demon community could ever hope to commit.

Good point

And the earth, she could feel it…it was screaming, choking on all the pollution they’d made; crying, devastated at all the wars they were carrying out- ruining what the earth cared for, the inhabitants. She could feel the betrayal that leaked out of every fiber of the world’s being; the planet was dying after it had taken them in, looked after them…provided them with the basics of everything they needed. Food, water, even cures to the poisons that lurked around them.

You know, when you put it that way...

PS: How did all those dead bodies get into the hill in the first place? And it must have been not that long ago if they still had flesh on them!
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [1 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 22" from lucyferr
Review:
Please o please let Kinsey have got eaten!
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [1 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from lucyferr
Review:
Love that Kinsey is getting to feel some pain - flaying's got to hurt... glad he ain't given a quick death. Make it slow and painful...
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [1 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue part 2" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Nice bit of work, really.

True, I would have preferred it if you’d had Willow thinking at least a BIT at the beginning about the fact that she slept with a guy when she was fairly confident she was gay at this point in her life, but since you addressed that issue later on, all in all things went well.

The Scoobies’ initial reactions to meeting SG-1 was a particularly interesting ‘blend’ of amusing, frustrating and intriguing- particularly the part where they thought that Teal’c was a new supersoldier, and their later aid in that translation added a very interesting angle to the rest of the story.

Plus, of course, Kinsey FINALLY got what he deserved for definite (Even in the show there’s still a CHANCE he’s alive; I almost wish he’d come back in some future movie or episode just so the characters could kill him for certain).

And as for the conclusion...

I have a feeling that the sequel is going to be VERY interesting when you get around to writing it.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [5 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue part 2" from winnie
Review:
I like the whole thing. Thank you for your work.
Review By [winnie] • Date [21 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue part 2" from LalaithQuetzalli
Review:
Pretty good story, I think a few things were a bit rushed, like the revelation of Daniel's status as Chris's father, and the way the all agreed to work together. I would have liked a more conclusive ending, if you know what I mean, but this was pretty good anyway.
Great fic!
Review By [LalaithQuetzalli] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue part 2" from Ansku
Review:
Nice one :) The beginning is a bit unpolished but it keeps getting better towards the end :)
Comments from author:
thanks!
Review By [Ansku] • Date [11 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue part 2" from BillieBog
Review:
Thanks so much for this. Loved the story and looking forward to the next one.

BB
Comments from author:
thanks!
Review By [BillieBog] • Date [20 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue part 2" from Keshkreature
Review:
Oh, I loved the ending! And a sequel would be great! I'd love to see how Willow and Daniel get along during the getting-to-know you phase.
Comments from author:
Thank you! it'll definitely be interesting
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [9 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue part 2" from RevDorothyL
Review:
What a very satisfying finish! Thank you for bringing Willow, Chris, and Daniel to this place in their lives.
Comments from author:
thank you!

seemed to be a fitting way for finishing the story; at least until the sequel anyway :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue part 2" from smolder
Review:
I loved that ending. So cute and wonderful and real while still leaving an open window for a possible follow up. Great story. Great, great, great.

BTW, where did that machette come from anyway?
Comments from author:
thanks! there's going to be a sequel (:

the machete? well, a "substantiel amount" of the building disappeared (including certain area); so the machete pretty much just stopped being in the building and dropped to the Zombie-cr*pping ground ;)

glad you liked the story
Review By [smolder] • Date [7 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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