“They want to watch us until we go bad again, they don’t trust us…and I don’t think that they should.”
whoa... talk about precocious...
it was a good thing that three former-Initiative soldiers had taken it upon themselves to speak up for Willow and Chris, defending them at every direction. Riley Finn, his wife Samantha and Graham Miller were friends of Willow’s group and were also demon-hunters; they, along with SG1, Hammond and a few others, had managed to convince the Joint Chiefs and the President to not hold them accountable for their actions.
Wondered about that...
Comments from author:
Chris is the child of Daniel and Willow; no one would expect any different :)
They do need some sort of protection, even if they are witches
thanks for the review!
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Not just the demons…no THEY were meant to be evil, they were made that way…a lot of them had no choice, it was just in their nature. Like tigers to fawns, they were the hunters because that was all they knew. But, humans…no, they had their free will, they came into the world with souls and they still committed worse atrocities than even the demon community could ever hope to commit.
Good point
And the earth, she could feel it…it was screaming, choking on all the pollution they’d made; crying, devastated at all the wars they were carrying out- ruining what the earth cared for, the inhabitants. She could feel the betrayal that leaked out of every fiber of the world’s being; the planet was dying after it had taken them in, looked after them…provided them with the basics of everything they needed. Food, water, even cures to the poisons that lurked around them.
You know, when you put it that way...
PS: How did all those dead bodies get into the hill in the first place? And it must have been not that long ago if they still had flesh on them!
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [1 Jul 10] • Not Rated
True, I would have preferred it if you’d had Willow thinking at least a BIT at the beginning about the fact that she slept with a guy when she was fairly confident she was gay at this point in her life, but since you addressed that issue later on, all in all things went well.
The Scoobies’ initial reactions to meeting SG-1 was a particularly interesting ‘blend’ of amusing, frustrating and intriguing- particularly the part where they thought that Teal’c was a new supersoldier, and their later aid in that translation added a very interesting angle to the rest of the story.
Plus, of course, Kinsey FINALLY got what he deserved for definite (Even in the show there’s still a CHANCE he’s alive; I almost wish he’d come back in some future movie or episode just so the characters could kill him for certain).
And as for the conclusion...
I have a feeling that the sequel is going to be VERY interesting when you get around to writing it.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [5 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Pretty good story, I think a few things were a bit rushed, like the revelation of Daniel's status as Chris's father, and the way the all agreed to work together. I would have liked a more conclusive ending, if you know what I mean, but this was pretty good anyway. Great fic!
Review By [LalaithQuetzalli] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I loved that ending. So cute and wonderful and real while still leaving an open window for a possible follow up. Great story. Great, great, great.
BTW, where did that machette come from anyway?
Comments from author:
thanks! there's going to be a sequel (:
the machete? well, a "substantiel amount" of the building disappeared (including certain area); so the machete pretty much just stopped being in the building and dropped to the Zombie-cr*pping ground ;)
