Wonderful story! Well told!

Glad you enjoyed it. ;-)

A long long time ago (around 5-7 years) in a house far far away (20 miles or so), I fell in love with the Honor Harrington series. It eventually occur to me to look for fan fiction of it. I found nothing worthwhile.

While short, this feels like a very nice start.

Thanks. I'll try not to disappoint.

Great little fic, always like to try out HH xovers.

DaveT.

Thanks. Hope the next part isn't too long in showing up.

ahh yes..Xander and those damned things *g*.. Nice story and good there is already a bit more
of it *g*

Yeah. Xander has good reason to not like prophecies, since they never seem to herald good news. ;-)

Hey Wiz, you should really continue this one. I loved it. Was always a big fan of the Honor series. Would love to see what your dark devious mind could come up with. :P

Thanks, I appreciate hearing your opinions about my work.

I've started working on a follow-up to this story, but work, having to do a lot of travel for my job and Real Life trying to kick me in the stones for the past month and a half has prevented me from getting ANY writing done at all. ;-(

Hopefully, things will lighten up soon, and I can get back to my writing.

This was a wonderful story. My favorite character from Buffy dropped into one of the worlds created by my favorite author. I have only recently discovered fanfiction (and actually had to register for this website in order to add this review), but this is a wonderful story. It is also a delicious premise and I am hopeful that you will someday be able to add some sort of sequel. If not, I just wanted to thank you anyway for what's already there.

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing.

I do have some ideas about how to follow this up, but I just have to find the time to write it.

This was a great short read... though I would love to see it continued one day.

Thanks. I know how I want to follow it up, I just need to find the time to do so.

I can't spell, but anyway....

The question was: Aww, man! Can't I ever catch a break?

The answer is: humerus (aka, what broke)

OK. Got it now. ;-)

And it was.

Yes. In his hummas, if memory serves. ;)

NO idea what you meant by this.

Nice story.
I want more.
I have it tracked and will be happy whenever you write more chapters.
Great writing as usual.

Thanks. I appreciate hearing your comments. Hopefully, my muse will turn her attentions back to this in the near future.

Xander falling into what was one of my favorite universes. Great idea and well written.

Just needs more.

Thanks

Lee

PS Kudos to your massive brain for all these different crossovers.

I appreciate the feedback.

And I plan on following this up - just not sure when.

What do you mean, "This story is complete."? That's not "complete". That's "introduced". You simply _must_ continue it!!!

If you makes you feel any better, I have a general outline of the next installment made out. ;-)

I just need to find the time to write it, when RL and my muse deign to cooperate.

argh.. what a tease.

Its a great beginning to a story. Any chance of more? =)

I've got the basic plot worked out to follow up on this, so it's just a matter of finding the time to start writing it.

As I noted in the story, there's a prophecy involved, and I''ll give you a hint about it:

"...the Horned Abomination, Herald of Darkness and Vanguard of the Demon Horde, shall appear and attack the Mother of the Sword, and the Paladin shall shield her with his own body, that the Destroyer might vanquish the fiend...

"Torn from his home and tossed asunder through the Void, the Brother of the Sword shall labor greatly in his quest for wisdom and knowledge, that his loved ones be delivered from the Leviathan..."

There's a lot more besides that and, hopefully, you'll be seeing it in the near future.

This was a very good story I would like to see it continued.

Don't worry, I intend to do exactly that. Just have to find the time to do so. Thanks for reviewing.

really good but sort of short, i just read the first nine books of HH and thought to re read this in a better frame of mind. you might want to write another one or a different one with Xander in the HH verse. I liked it a lot.

Thanks for reviewing. I do intend to follow this up, and even have a general plotline set up. It's just a matter of finding the time to write it.