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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Wonderful story! Well told!
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it. ;-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [1 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TinMan
Review:
A long long time ago (around 5-7 years) in a house far far away (20 miles or so), I fell in love with the Honor Harrington series. It eventually occur to me to look for fan fiction of it. I found nothing worthwhile.

While short, this feels like a very nice start.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'll try not to disappoint.
Review By [TinMan] • Date [18 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Great little fic, always like to try out HH xovers.

DaveT.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Hope the next part isn't too long in showing up.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [30 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
ahh yes..Xander and those damned things *g*.. Nice story and good there is already a bit more
of it *g*
Comments from author:
Yeah. Xander has good reason to not like prophecies, since they never seem to herald good news. ;-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [10 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mordare
Review:
Hey Wiz, you should really continue this one. I loved it. Was always a big fan of the Honor series. Would love to see what your dark devious mind could come up with. :P
Comments from author:
Thanks, I appreciate hearing your opinions about my work.

I've started working on a follow-up to this story, but work, having to do a lot of travel for my job and Real Life trying to kick me in the stones for the past month and a half has prevented me from getting ANY writing done at all. ;-(

Hopefully, things will lighten up soon, and I can get back to my writing.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [2 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from xanadu
Review:
This was a wonderful story. My favorite character from Buffy dropped into one of the worlds created by my favorite author. I have only recently discovered fanfiction (and actually had to register for this website in order to add this review), but this is a wonderful story. It is also a delicious premise and I am hopeful that you will someday be able to add some sort of sequel. If not, I just wanted to thank you anyway for what's already there.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing.

I do have some ideas about how to follow this up, but I just have to find the time to write it.
Review By [xanadu] • Date [13 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from prehensileclaw
Review:
This was a great short read... though I would love to see it continued one day.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I know how I want to follow it up, I just need to find the time to do so.
Review By [prehensileclaw] • Date [2 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rhyssia
Review:
I can't spell, but anyway....

The question was: Aww, man! Can't I ever catch a break?

The answer is: humerus (aka, what broke)
Comments from author:
OK. Got it now. ;-)

And it was.
Review By [Rhyssia] • Date [14 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rhyssia
Review:
Yes. In his hummas, if memory serves. ;)
Comments from author:
NO idea what you meant by this.
Review By [Rhyssia] • Date [11 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Puzzlemaster
Review:
Nice story.
I want more.
I have it tracked and will be happy whenever you write more chapters.
Great writing as usual.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I appreciate hearing your comments. Hopefully, my muse will turn her attentions back to this in the near future.
Review By [Puzzlemaster] • Date [30 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Xander falling into what was one of my favorite universes. Great idea and well written.

Just needs more.

Thanks

Lee

PS Kudos to your massive brain for all these different crossovers.
Comments from author:
I appreciate the feedback.

And I plan on following this up - just not sure when.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [21 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FicChick
Review:
What do you mean, "This story is complete."? That's not "complete". That's "introduced". You simply _must_ continue it!!!
Comments from author:
If you makes you feel any better, I have a general outline of the next installment made out. ;-)

I just need to find the time to write it, when RL and my muse deign to cooperate.
Review By [FicChick] • Date [29 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from prehensileclaw
Review:
argh.. what a tease.

Its a great beginning to a story. Any chance of more? =)
Comments from author:
I've got the basic plot worked out to follow up on this, so it's just a matter of finding the time to start writing it.

As I noted in the story, there's a prophecy involved, and I''ll give you a hint about it:

"...the Horned Abomination, Herald of Darkness and Vanguard of the Demon Horde, shall appear and attack the Mother of the Sword, and the Paladin shall shield her with his own body, that the Destroyer might vanquish the fiend...

"Torn from his home and tossed asunder through the Void, the Brother of the Sword shall labor greatly in his quest for wisdom and knowledge, that his loved ones be delivered from the Leviathan..."

There's a lot more besides that and, hopefully, you'll be seeing it in the near future.
Review By [prehensileclaw] • Date [25 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from chronos
Review:
This was a very good story I would like to see it continued.
Comments from author:
Don't worry, I intend to do exactly that. Just have to find the time to do so. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [chronos] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from rocky
Review:
really good but sort of short, i just read the first nine books of HH and thought to re read this in a better frame of mind. you might want to write another one or a different one with Xander in the HH verse. I liked it a lot.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. I do intend to follow this up, and even have a general plotline set up. It's just a matter of finding the time to write it.
Review By [rocky] • Date [13 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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