Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from ClumsyElf
Great story!! Hope to see more soon!!
Review By [ClumsyElf
] • Date [28 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from wickedfire
oh do continue this it's sounding great so far.
Review By [wickedfire
] • Date [3 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Keshkreature
lol, very cute. And if ale feeds your plot bunnies, have another round =)
I really like how Dawn gets stuck in something so bizzare due to normal bleeding, and how she's making such a fine hobbit.
Review By [Keshkreature
] • Date [24 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Raghle
I like this story so far! Will you be posting more? It seems such a lovely idea so far - a very good challenge response!
Keep writing... and drinking ;)
Review By [Raghle
] • Date [21 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MarcusRowland
Hadn't realised that someone had answered my challenge - nice to see this, hope there will be more.
Review By [MarcusRowland
] • Date [2 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from WinterRayne
sounds interesting so far. hope for more soon.
Review By [WinterRayne
] • Date [28 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
They left the "little girl" by the fire? Not quite following it, but an amusing concept so far.
Comments from author:
Yes, I think I probably should have waited until I wasn't a bit tipsy. Drunken ideas are good, but writing them before you get a sober look through? Not so much. Still, things will be straightened up!
Review By [VillageOrchid
] • Date [13 Feb 07] • Not Rated