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Review of chapter "No Longer a World of White and Black" from LeaFairy
Review:
*sniffle* Noooo Angel! How sad Dean killed Angel. And poor Faith having to be there when he turned to dust. *sniffles again* Really compelling fic. Great work!!
Comments from author:
Thanks. The craziest part of this story is that it all came to me after looking at Ava's manip. It was kinda awesome.
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [5 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No Longer a World of White and Black" from (Past Donor)SwimTeam
Review:
This story is amazingly written. I am glad Dean didn't die, but you had the characters down cold.
Rory:)
Review By [(Past Donor)SwimTeam] • Date [1 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No Longer a World of White and Black" from Ellie
Review:
Wow, that was sad. I'm glad that Faith didn't kill Dean though. But what a waste of a redeemed soul to die like that.

-Ellie
Comments from author:
The manip that inspired this wasn't sunshine and roses so I didn't think the fic should be either. Thanks very much for the review though.
Review By [Ellie] • Date [20 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No Longer a World of White and Black" from Drusilla
Review:
Ohhh I'm loving this so far! Can't wait for the next chappie!
Comments from author:
Um...as much as I would love to commit to another chapter... I don't really know whether that will happen. *shrugs* We'll see. :) Thanks for the review!
Review By [Drusilla] • Date [19 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No Longer a World of White and Black" from BillieBog
Review:
Great snippet. Thanks for sharing.

BB
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Review By [BillieBog] • Date [16 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No Longer a World of White and Black" from WhiteWolf
Review:
I like it. Didn't like that Angel died, but without him dying there wouldn't be any story.
Comments from author:
If it makes you feel any better I didn't enjoy killing him. I just saw the manip and knew it had to happen like it did... :(

Thanks for the review though! :)
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [15 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No Longer a World of White and Black" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
OMG! My little manip inspired that? It was…words leave me on how to describe how amazing this was.

Faith’s emotions were perfectly interwoven. Her actions, her reactions, her struggle not to kill Dean for killing Angel. And Dean killed Angel! And Faith was letting Angel feed from her! You have me all riled up and now it’s over but don’t get me wrong this is prefect as a one-shot. You don’t need to add to this unless you want too. *puppy eyes*

A small part of me thinks Faith is a bigger person than Buffy because of this fic. ‘Cause I’m thinking she’d have done a lot more damage to Dean before allowing him to slip into unconsciousness.
Comments from author:
Yes, your little manip inspired that! I took one look at it and immediately I had most of the scene in my head - the end was the only thing I had to work at.

I'm glad that you had a good, positive reaction. I was a little nervous - okay, a lot nervous, but I'm relieved that you enjoyed!

I am torn between adding another part to this because I like how it is right now. But I want to have another part - mostly because the summary I wrote for the fic made me want to write more...weird-o that I am.

And Dean's a right bastard cause he killed Angel. Just hauled off and shoved a stake through his heart. And you can't really blame him, although I had to put myself in a 'I hate Dean' mood to write this. And I wanted to kill him...God, I can't even tell you how much I wanted to have Faith kill Dean. But Faith has come a long way as a person and I couldn't have her go and undo it all just because Dean didn't know any better. There might be another story in the works - not related to this one, but based off the manip. Let me think on that one...and I'll see if I can get that one to work - it'll be much darker.
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [15 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No Longer a World of White and Black" from (Moderator)KaylaShay
Review:
This worked wonderfully with that manip. I was able to realize they were connected even though you hadn't told me (or I forgot if you did). Dean thinks he has done the right thing and saved the innocent. Faith toying with her thin line of control with the urge to kill Dean for what he did...

Just wonderful, sad, emotional... etc., etc., etc...
Comments from author:
Comment love!

I think I had mentioned to you that I was going to write a story based on Ava's manip...but I'm not entirely sure how specific I was about anything. Hell I might have been talking to Saturn about it. Haha, I almost put Saturna - then people would be really confused about his manhood.

I toyed with many outcomes after Dean killed Angel. Hell I even had Buffy at the end of the story at one point...but Buffy, Faith, and Dean ended up talking too much and it wasn't right. So I erased it and started anew. I'm still not 100% happy with the ending, but I think that is because it's a hard fic to swallow. ;)

Thanks for the review love!
Review By [(Moderator)KaylaShay] • Date [14 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No Longer a World of White and Black" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
I really liked this! Are you planning a sequel? Cause the summary give the impression of more to the story. Please?
Comments from author:
That bad evil summary. It lured you in and then tricked you. Bad summary, no cookie.

No, seriously, I was struggling to come up with a title and summary for the story. And quite frankly I'm not happy with either, but it is what it is.

There is not a sequel in the works right now. But seeing as this idea popped into my head after a glance at the manip, a sequel might just appear too.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [14 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No Longer a World of White and Black" from (Recent Donor)Kiwikatipo
Review:
What, the end? That can't be the end. It was shaping up to be the most intriguing summer fling ever.

Why did Faith help Angel and not Buffy? I'm sure I know why but I would have loved your explanation. What happened to everyone else from AI?

If you did continue this story may I suggest you get Faith to resurrect Wesley from the dead as per his instructions, because he was destined for hell.
Comments from author:
Unfortunately I'm not seeing any kind of roses and sunshine in the future for Dean and Faith. So the summer fling this is definitely out. Perhaps a summer of a bound, gagged, and tortured Dean, but definitely not a happy one.

I'm not sure when you meant Faith would be helping Buffy? I never believed that Buffy would just shut the door on Angel like was shown in AtS:Season 5. And even if Buffy decided that Angel had gone all dark side then Faith would have stepped up and gone to do some investigating. Because she owed Angel that at least. So, that is why I had Faith in L.A. at the end of the Angel Series. As for everyone else from team AI, what we say in the finale is what we get. No alterations, no exceptions, nada.

I honestly don't remember Wesley requesting to be resurrected from the dead. When did he ask for that? And while Wes had done some questionable things in his life, I'm not sure he was Hell-bound... *shrugs*

Thanks for the review! :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Kiwikatipo] • Date [14 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No Longer a World of White and Black" from DarkLady
Review:
please please tell me that there will be more to this story!
Comments from author:
Possibly, but I can't promise anything. This just appeared, so perhaps a sequel will too.
Review By [DarkLady] • Date [14 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No Longer a World of White and Black" from littleoldme
Review:
Beautifully sad story, here. Both characters are perfectly in character, and this is definitely original in terms of plot. Kudos!
Comments from author:
*bounces* Thanks! I always get excited over your reviews. The sad part is all the manip of Ava's fault...if it wasn't so darned sad this plot bunny wouldn't have been born.

The only exciting part is that my muse seems to be returning :)
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [14 Feb 07] • Not Rated
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