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Review of chapter "Q & A" from spring
Review:
More please. I love this one.
Comments from author:
Well, this story is done, though the series shall continue.

Thanks for the review!

~Alice~
Review By [spring] • Date [23 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Q & A" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Short, but with a nice amount of character development and plot. Thanks for sharing!
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the FB
@lice
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [10 Mar 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Q & A" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
very cool!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [1 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So Much for the Deposit" from katimaviklindzy
Review:
lol. Abby would think that would be cool. Not to mention that poor Buffy is STILL not taller then anyone :P
Comments from author:
She would; she'd dig knowing she could beat the crap out of everyone.
Thanks for the FB
Review By [katimaviklindzy] • Date [1 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Q & A" from Bill
Review:
So very well done!
Comments from author:
*grins stupidly*
Thanks! More stories to follow.
@lice
Review By [Bill] • Date [1 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So Much for the Deposit" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Nice bit of writing there well-done. I love NCIS xovers and Abby is a great character.

Don't know about you but I think the new Isreali agent(her name escapes me for the moment) is a Slayer. Have you seen the way she drives????

Anyway, I'll look out for more of this.

All the best,
DaveT.
Comments from author:
See, I've considered Ziva David as a slayer before (this was inspired by chapter 107 of Tales from the Barman, which I wrote dragging in NCIS), and you know what, Ziva is so hard core tough chick, that the idea of her having Slayer strength is pretty scary. Or at least I think so.
More will follow eventually, thanks for reading.
@lice
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [1 Mar 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Q & A" from purrfus
Review:
Cute.

I read one of your notes that said you would be trying a new format and create a series of shorts with Abby. Why? Not why with Abby, but why a series of shorts instead of 1 'story' with multiple chapters of drabbles, ficlets, etc? What is different about this that makes you want to try something new? I ask because I am not a writer and have no understanding of inspiration or author necessity.
Comments from author:
First of all, I'm still not sure if my shorts should be posted as seperate stories, or as seperate chapters. I'm thinking each story will be a different group of drabbles. "Nightmares" was about her learning what she was, the next would be her training and learning, and then another group about her return to DC. What do you think?
Also, I'm doing this because I think it would be fun for Abby to become a slayer, and thus reveal this world to the NCIS folks. But since I don't have a plot to speak of, I thought I'd just do some drabbly bits.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Q & A" from Arjai
Review:
Oh so terribly interesting, Please, and I mean with sugar, and a cherry on top, please, continue.
Comments from author:
It's part of a series, of Abby learning to be a slayer, returning to DC, etc. *whispers*
I'll give you a hint though: she's gonna get a boyfriend.
Review By [Arjai] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So Much for the Deposit" from LadyRyn
Review:
I like it. I would like to read more. The dreams are a little hard to follow, but I think that is how you meant to write it, so it seems, so it works. It is so Abby too. Good work.
Comments from author:
Yes, some of the dreams were specific, hinting at past slayers shown on the series, others were vague. But I'm glad you liked it and Abby. Abby is fun and I think she'd be a great slayer. So would Ziva, but she'd also be kinda scary. She's already scary and she isn't even a slayer. Thanks for the FB.
Review By [LadyRyn] • Date [19 Feb 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So Much for the Deposit" from WhiteWolf
Review:
cool, but I think you meant 'big gun' instead of 'big guy'.
Comments from author:
Uh.... no? I mean, peas?
Crap, thought I'd caught the typos.
Thanks for the headsup and the FB.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [17 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So Much for the Deposit" from ElaineRhodes
Review:
This is a great crossover idea. I know it's a stand-alone, but would love to see more stories with Slayer!Abby.
Comments from author:
No, it isn't. I've decided that that this will be a ficlet series, but I've decided to also write one more chapter in this story, of her learning more from willow and Xan. Thanks for the FB. I heart slayer!abby, too.
Review By [ElaineRhodes] • Date [17 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So Much for the Deposit" from PATM
Review:
Interesting take on the series, I prefer long form stories so it is too short. Loaded with Malaprop's so pondering
of word choices is a must. I'll be reading the others now, thanks for the story.
Comments from author:
What did you find difficult or problematic, if you don't mind. This is going to be part of a longer work. It will be a series of short works joined together, something new for me to try.
Review By [PATM] • Date [16 Feb 07] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So Much for the Deposit" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
very cool!
Comments from author:
Thanks! FB gives me the joy.
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [16 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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