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Review of chapter "Chaper Two" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice, but nothing was altered from the episode.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [6 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chaper Two" from eriktheviking
Review:
Nicely written.

I might have missed the AN about time-line shift for Xander, also how did he qualify as an officer? Direct recruitment?

This deserves to be continued.

You missed a couple of obvious one liners: O'Neill's "cracked team" and Colonel Jack O'Neill, the Air Force's answer to Homer Simpson.

Thanks

Lee
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [21 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chaper Two" from KingOfCretins
Review:
Good stuff here, any chance of more or have you given it up?
Review By [KingOfCretins] • Date [10 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chaper Two" from Dragonelf
Review:
I hope you will be inspired to continue this series soon.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [21 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chaper Two" from Bill
Review:
Very well done!
Review By [Bill] • Date [30 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chaper Two" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Good work.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [24 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chaper Two" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chaper Two" from KingHenrytheV
Review:
A great start to an interesting and exciting series (ignoring the fact that the years don't line up at all). I like the premise very much, though it kind of looks like Xander stole some of Jack's lines. I'm curious to see who will be on SG-4 and how things turn out differently for the folks at Stargate Command.
Review By [KingHenrytheV] • Date [24 Feb 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chaper Two" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
tx for the new chapter. jack and xander just crys out for chaos (hmm Ethan?? ) ;) by the way mayb u should name the team Xander egt SG-4X
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [24 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chaper Two" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Are you gonna keep going or what?
Comments from author:
Yes, the main story is yet to come. This was basically an introduction, just rehashing Children of the Gods but with Xander. SG-4 hasn't even been introduced yet.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [23 Feb 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DeathGod
Review:
Interesting. Hope to see more of this soon.
Review By [DeathGod] • Date [19 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
great start and i liked the interaction between Xan and Jack. Keep on going!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [19 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
This is an interesting take on the first episode! I look forward to seeing StarGate!Xander.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [19 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [19 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Jackkongmaxwell
Review:
looking good so far the interaction between xander and O'neil is refreshing keep it up
Review By [Jackkongmaxwell] • Date [19 Feb 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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