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Review of chapter "Prologue" from IAMZIPPY
i want more
Review By [IAMZIPPY] • Date [29 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Bobboky
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [1 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from purrfus
The mixture of characters used has potential, but the story isn't living up to it just yet.

Too many characters too fast without sufficient background. Any AU really needs some setup. Keeping the majority of the costume ideas secret may be meant to tantalize, unfortunately in this case it just adds to the general sense of frustration.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [20 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from malaskor
General idea is good, but the pace is way too fast - for example why is Jesse still alive? Why are all those other characters from Gilmore Girls, Veronica Mars and all those other series in Sunnydale? As it is we just have a huge pile of characters and for most no reason why they are there...

With some more polishing and details this should be good, but it isn't there yet.
Review By [malaskor] • Date [20 Feb 07] • Not Rated
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