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Review of chapter "Day Two at the SGC (Part 2)" from (Past Donor)Dianasis
Review:
Such a lovely tale! Thank you for this new angle of SGC/BTVS Cross. I'm especially thrilled since I've yet to have my enjoyment interrupted by my inner grammar nazi (no mistakes! Yay!).
Comments from author:
So glad that you enjoyed it, and that you didn't spot any mistakes. I try to go over things with a fine tooth comb, because I find grammar and spelling mistakes distracting myself. I hope one day to get this story finished. Unfortunately every day life has been taking up more time than I would like.
Review By [(Past Donor)Dianasis] • Date [31 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Day Two at the SGC (Part 2)" from Silver
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this is a great take on an otherwise under-utilized character. the only reason I cannot give this a 10 is becasue it has not been updated in a while. I hope you are able to update this soon!. Keep up the good work!
Review By [Silver] • Date [24 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Day Two at the SGC (Part 2)" from aveave
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Great story. I hope you will write next chapter soon.
Review By [aveave] • Date [10 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Day Two at the SGC (Part 2)" from (Recent Donor)draconin
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An interesting idea and a career that I can very easily see Giles going for. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)draconin] • Date [3 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Day Two at the SGC (Part 2)" from Addlcove
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Anymore planned for this story?
Comments from author:
It is. I just hit a few extra big road bumps in life. I was diagnosed with Late Stage Lyme/Chronic Lyme disease about eight months ago (http://www.lymedisease.org/home.html) and treatment is an absolute bear. Additionally I am trying to complete my law degree while dealing with chronic illness. So I haven't had a lot of energy to write in my down time. But the story is still kicking around my head and I have no intention of abandoning it. I can't promise when it will be updated, but it will eventually be updated. My goal is to finish it...though at this pace I will be finishing it in a nursing home and we'll all have forgotten the main plot points anyway. Thanks for checking in. I apologize for the long hiatus.
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [19 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Day Two at the SGC (Part 2)" from merkaba
Review:
This is such a fun story. One of my favorite. Any chance of an update soon?
Comments from author:
Aw, thank you! It makes me really happy that people are still interested in this story. I'm really hoping to work on it some more over winter break. Let's all keep our fingers crossed that health and time will allow for more chapters.
Review By [merkaba] • Date [12 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Day Two at the SGC (Part 2)" from (Current Donor)vidicon
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A very well written and nicely conceived story. I like the interaction of Giles and the remaining Scoobies as well as Spike, even if he does lack a soul. Thank you for writing this and I hope it will be continued...
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [24 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Day Two at the SGC (Part 2)" from Addlcove
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any plans to update this?

great story so far.
Comments from author:
Glad you are enjoying the story. There are plans to update. I apologize for my slow writing.
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [31 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Day Two at the SGC (Part 2)" from mithrilandtj
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Love how it's going so far.
I especially liked the sparring between Giles & Teal'c
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [27 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Day Two at the SGC (Part 2)" from yrfgd
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Excellent story line and very well presented. Thanks for sharing this with us and keep up the good work.
Review By [yrfgd] • Date [9 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Day Two at the SGC (Part 2)" from AllenPitt
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Any chance of a visit from Willow or Spike at some point? Just wondering... I like that it's Giles- centered. Maybe at some world they can find some ruins with inscriptions in some demonic language? Or referencing a "Key"? (those ZPMs didn't charge themselves, maybe 'the Key' did?) or maybe Cassie can get all Chosen or something.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [3 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Day Two at the SGC (Part 2)" from dreameralways
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I am loving this story. It is sad that Buffy is dead but I can sort of understand why you did it. I am so looking forward to Scoobie and Spike visits. I imagine that will cause much confusion, even if it is of the more normal kind. I am so hoping that Anya and Vala will get to meet eventually. I wonder if Vala would think that Anya needs a filter or if she's awesome because she's completely open with what she says (since Anya is a bit worse about saying what's on her mind).
Anyway, this is a lot of fun and I look forward to more.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [2 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Day Two at the SGC (Part 2)" from TwistedSlinky
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I'm glad I stumbled upon this story; it's very fun. I like how you've written for both the SG and Scoobie gangs. Nicely done. I also like the role you have Spike playing. Great job. I can't wait to see where you go with this.
Review By [TwistedSlinky] • Date [2 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Day Two at the SGC (Part 2)" from (Current Donor)vladt
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very good tale. thank you for the excellent read.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [1 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Day Two at the SGC (Part 2)" from ianquest
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An excellent story so far; I'm really enjoying how you're depicting Giles settling into his unfamiliar new world, without going so far as to make him a fish out of water. The SGC training is great, especially 'Geek Survival 101' and the SGC Survival Guide; the SGC is just crazy enough to turn the joke list into a real how-to! I presume you're referring to the list floating around the Net, including here at TtH?

One minor thing I would like to point out; the fifth word of the story, you referred to 'staffs'. The plural for staff, in the sense of a quarter-staff, is 'staves', so one staff is a staff, many 'staffs' are staves. It's a mistake made very commonly, even by professional writers and spell-check software (you wouldn't believe how annoyed I get reading fantasy novels and Dungeons & Dragons rulebooks! ;) so I thought I'd mention it. Otherwise, the quality of the writing is superb, and I'm hoping to see more soon!

Keep up the great work!
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review, and for pointing out the misspelling of staves. Constructive criticism is immensely helpful. It is wonderful to know what is working and what needs to be tweaked.

The Survival Guide is based on the many lists going around the Net. I figured that just that sort of list would have gone around on base, and eventually would have been made official since it saved so many lives.

I'm drawing a lot on my experiences of having been the new girl in a totally unfamiliar environment. In my experience, the fish out of water comedy of errors isn't as common as stories like to make it.

Thanks again for the review.
Review By [ianquest] • Date [1 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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