Review of chapter "Coffee Courtesy" from
purrfusReview:
Still sweet.
After reading it again I'm still puzzled that it ends where it does. The coffee scene is really good, and I understand he is in the middle of something or someone, but after the earlier excitement over the potential amulet location leaving it there doesn't really feel finished.
Review By [
purrfus] • Date [11 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coffee Courtesy" from
purrfusReview:
Loved the commercials.
The first installment was fantastic. This one needs a little something - more.
Review By [
purrfus] • Date [22 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coffee Courtesy" from
morgyairReview:
I loved this series of commercials thanks for doing the cross over talk about obscure
Review By [
morgyair] • Date [22 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coffee Courtesy" from
MetropolisRisingReview:
Umm, not much to sa other than : more please! I always liked those commercials and I think it'd be funny if Dawn ended up with fella (no I don't care about age difference in fiction!) Thnaks for this fun bit of fluff!
Review By [
MetropolisRising] • Date [22 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
