Liked it up till chapter 14, the god talk and god healing Dean was a bit too much. Also, Fred and George referenced Remus as Padfoot. Sirius was Padfoot (being the black dog) and Remus was Moony. Liked the idea but not the conclusion. Good story though, liked the pranks

I really like this story. Any chance of a sequel?

Chapter 14

wow, that was one hell of a chapter. Nice how Neville brought the DA in and all.

Ch 15

good conclusion to this awesome story. thank you for writing and sharing it with us.

uhh looks like one hell of a battle will be on us shortly and Sirius? Ahh not very
much surprised there :)

lol, awesome prank :)
Ron marring off his sister to Harry already?
HMM strange scene at the church and I'm looking forward to read what happens next.

Ch 9

loc the scene in the library with Harry and Draco was nice :)
nice Harry opened up to Dean and I'm surprised Dean wasn't on his way to Surrey at
ones :) Good the three could relax a bit in the bar.

10. Chapter 10

Lol, nicely done from Hermione with Ron and good they helped Harry a bit with
the prophecies, I also like that they try to interact with Draco

nice how Sam is helping Harry and Draco.
wow good trip to Azkaban and poor Draco

I'm surprised Snape is still alive after that, but the way how you handled
the aftermath war good.

good that John an DD are speaking about those things and also good that Sam at
least tries to what he should :)
Poor Ron, but nice try.
Never thought Hermy would be that stupid :9
Harry and Malfoy were quite good.

nice speech before the class...poor student *evilgrin*
and I'm curios about Malfoy :)

A falcon? nice choice and I really can picture how they hat to drag Sam out of the bookstore :)
2.2 Mil USD for a teaching job? Wow.....
Peeves will to be very careful this year )

lol, I think Snape nearly got an heart attack hearing DD anounce JW as the new DADA teacher.
oh I think Hermoine and Sam could become friends with their love for books and also nice Sam
and his father talked a bit.

Good work!! Almost wish Harry had gone with them for a bit while waiting for the press to die down. How will the Hunters react to Sam? Hope they can convince them he's one of the good guys. Glad neither Dean or Harry stayed dead.

Hi, I didn't review each chapter individually, rather than doing that I'm just going to put it all in one review, so sorry if this gets a bit too long.

It started out as a great story, yeah, it had a couple of grammatical errors, but everyone has they're bad days. In fact, grammar is something I myself am not very good at. Spelling, either. At any rate, I wanted to say that this was a good story, and I enjoyed reading it.

Personally I could have done with out God's portion of the story, and I think you americanized the Britain's too much. You also Christianized the Wizards. While they do celebrate the Christian holidays, they don't say "My God." They use phrases like "Merlin, no!" or "By Merlin's beard!". Other wise, it was a great story and a good plot initially. You characterized the Winchesters really well, and you didn't go over-board with the typicalness. Although, I thought Sam was more of a Ravenclaw or Slytherin than anything else. Dean is believable as a Gryffindor, but I prefer Hufflepuff, and John. Well I'm not quite sure what house he'd be in. More than likely Gryffindor. I really like Zeus, and wished he'd shown up more. He probably did, and I just didn't pay close enough attention.

At any rate, this was a good story, and I enjoyed reading it. Yes, there were a few mistakes here and there, and has room for improvement but what story doesn't? Thanks for writing, and keep up the good work!

--Mizu

Wow! you sure packed a punch with this story, let me tell ya. =) All i can really say is wow, and it was totally awesome. You did a wonderful job with the characterizations and the flow of the story. any story that can make me laugh or cry, or both, is one hell of a story. once again great job!