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Review of chapter "The Kindred" from Dragonelf
You have done a great job with this story and I hope you will get inspired to write a sequel.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Carrot Cheese Pie::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [8 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Kindred" from MarcusSLazarus
Nice bit of work.

Buffy/Charmed crossovers are always enjoyable when written well, and this one definitely had some intriguing ideas; the initial meeting between the two groups might have been a bit abrupt- it just seems a bit unlikely that BOTH groups made the same mistake regarding the other side being the vampires they were looking for-, but the idea of Leo and Chris having their own agenda was rather intriguing, and the addition of Faith’s own issues- along with her ‘secret’- was a particularly promising mystery from the moment you brought it into the plot.

Plus, of course, I can’t fault your idea about the nature of the connection between Paige and Faith; given Sam’s attitude after Patty’s death, the idea of him going off on his own to escape his grief is certainly possible, and it gives Faith an intriguing personal connection that I wouldn’t mind seeing more of.

Bringing in Leo and Prue like you did seemed a bit sudden, but it was still fairly interesting, and the implications of Prue having become... whatever she’s become... at the conclusion raise a few interesting questions that I’m hoping will be answered in the sequel.

The only real downside is Chris’s own apparent vagueness about his plan; the idea of him being Evil Wyatt is effective, but when even HE didn’t seem to be sure whether he wanted to stop the Hellmouth opening or just escalate the situation after it opens it somewhat detracted from the plot (Particularly after he went to the effort of coming back in time in the first place).

All in all, a good idea with some themes I wouldn’t mind seeing developed in a sequel, but you might want to refine your ideas before you start the next story.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [17 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Kindred" from Jinxy
well i have finished this now and it is just about perfect. i am so glad paige and faith are sisters, and it does make sense to me the way you told it. for prue or someone else to be faith's mother would be stretching it- for paige and faith to share fathers makes sense. i liked the ending, it was satisfying. and i am sooo glad you did away with travis, he was horrible. i like the twist of prue being a whitelighter too. i am definitely looking for more from you.
Review By [Jinxy] • Date [15 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Kindred" from Jinxy
honestly i haven't read this all yet, i've only read the first twenty two chapters over several days, but i definitely plan to finish and give you final feedback. so far i am simply blown away by this. you are simply an amazingly gifted writer. every character rings true, especially faith and the charmed girls. i LOVE this. the plot is great, and i really feel bad for several characters- obviously faith, buffy as well, and i am definitely a faith and not buffy fan as far as characters go. i cannot wait to finish this, and i only wish i could have such an inspired idea.
Review By [Jinxy] • Date [14 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Kindred" from RavenMorbisk
I'm tired 'cause it's like 5a.m. but I just couldn't stop reading this.. this is a great fic !!
Review By [RavenMorbisk] • Date [28 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Kindred" from prettyragdoll
This is absolutely one of my favorite stories now. You should DEFINITELY do a sequel. Please? haha. Great story
Review By [prettyragdoll] • Date [5 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Kindred" from (Past Donor)Snoopy
Hey, good to see you decided to put your story here. It's fantastic! I love how Faith was Paiges little sister, that was nice. I also like how they both felt such a strong connection to each other. The storyline with evil Chris was great, so happy he got his ass kicked!

Anyway, absolutely loved this story. Well done.

Leanne (or Leanne17 from
Review By [(Past Donor)Snoopy] • Date [27 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Kindred" from Maineiac
Hiya Jill, long time no see. So glad you added this story here. BTW. anyone reading reviews, this gal is a great writer!!!!!! Been reading her stuff for years at other sites, give it a go. Give me a shout in email baby sis. miss ya.

Review By [Maineiac] • Date [26 Feb 07] • Not Rated
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