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Blush and Chuckle

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Review of chapter "Blush and chuckle" from Araavea
Review:
I could see that happening. Super cute ;-)
Review By [Araavea] • Date [14 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blush and chuckle" from AtotheM
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That was cute!

I'd love to see them interact more. :)
Review By [AtotheM] • Date [18 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blush and chuckle" from (Past Donor)lucidity
Review:
I love this one. Very cute, fun little scene.

'lucidity
Review By [(Past Donor)lucidity] • Date [3 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blush and chuckle" from spk
Review:
I could so see this happening with the way Buffy is about languages. Nice chuckle for the readers...thanks! :)
Review By [spk] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blush and chuckle" from (Past Donor)Kiwikatipo
Review:
Put up a disclaimer.

Okay constructive criticism it's too short. Buffy should not say it's funny, that's for us the reader to think. You could get several more language misunderstanding jokes out of Buffy and Elrond.


Look up an American to British slang explanation page for ideas

http://www.peak.org/~jeremy/dictionary/chapters/title.php

Hope this helps. Because your story was a nice little piece otherwise.
Review By [(Past Donor)Kiwikatipo] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blush and chuckle" from Rossell
Review:
Hahaha ...
This is funny
I like it
Review By [Rossell] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Not Rated
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