Review of chapter "Lilly the Vampire Slayer" from Chosenfire
Review:
Are you going to do more of this vers" I love the idea of baby Lily being a Slayer and Duncan and Dawn would be so cute together. Great story, it was really enjoyable and a great way to spend some time.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
There's a definite possibility. This one ran away with me; it ended up about twice as long as I had intended. Dawn and Duncan seem to have good chemistry.
Review By [Chosenfire] • Date [7 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Um, I'm confused. Is Dawn seeing scenes of herself in different universes in the pools of water? Or were each of the four chapters different ficlets? And I'd love it if you actually developed the aurora chapter further (maybe start a while back even).
Comments from author:
Yes, Dawn's looking into different pools and each one is showing her a different universe.
Aurora definitely has the potential to be returned to at some point.
I've both liked and loathed every ficlet you've posted on this so far. I like them because they're unique and extremely enjoyable short fics in 'verses that I enjoy.
I LOATHE them because they're so freaking short! I wish you'd turn a couple of them into full-length fics!
Danke for sharing, no matter the length.
Comments from author:
Thanks =).
The reason I'm posting them as ficlets is because I usually run out of steam on a story if I try to make it full-length. I may extend one or two of them in the future, but no promises...
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [7 Apr 07] • Not Rated