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Review of chapter "Live in New York 2: Rewrite" from Harry
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Life in Sunnydale for Xander is NOT going to be the same! Being taken in as a foundling by Thor, earning the respect of the Avengers and Stephen Strange, this is some SERIOUS respect and honors!!!! Look out Mayor Wilkins, trouble is going to be heading your way. And Travers: You try ANYTHING that would upset members of the Avengers, be prepared to have your rear end handed to you!!
Review By [Harry] • Date [9 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Calls From New York" from Harry
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Time for the fight. And with Thor's blessing and his weapon as well!!! Time to see if Xander has what it takes to use this weapon or not.
Review By [Harry] • Date [9 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
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Well, Xander just met up with his first Avenger. And you do NOT get the She Hulk/Jennifer Walters upset. She's not as powerful as her cousin, but she is still a powerhouse. And Xander proved that he can be a gentleman as well.
Review By [Harry] • Date [9 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Live in New York 2: Rewrite" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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Yup, definitely giving a good pull on those strings! More good work!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Live in New York 2: Rewrite" from Selonianth
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Xander Thorson. Not quite the ring to it as Odinson but I'll forgive it.
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [4 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Live in New York 2: Rewrite" from SledgeHammer
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That's right; Xander was NOT being stupid. Not even close. Demon vs. God (Thor *is* a God, his Donald Blake and Sigurd Jarlson alters notwithstanding); hence Xander using that Balance against the demon. Thing is - what demonic associated entity would be after either Stark International or Tony in particular? (Offhand, I can think of only one - the Mandarin.) Jennifer's premise makes way too much sense - since the party is being thrown at Tony's NYC retreat (not at Avengers Mansion, which, even though Tony owns both, is in a separate borough), and Xander didn't know where (and none of the Avengers did until the last minute) means that the attack was centering on Tony or Stark International itself. Further, given that Iron Man has had little dealings with the supernatural (and that is despite his friendships with both Doctor Strange *and* Thor), it's not that most supernatural Big Bads would consider Shellhead (Tony and Rhodey's own cryptonym for Iron Man, regardless of which of them wore the armor) that much of a threat. As to why Doctor Strange was there at the end - three reasons; first off, he is the Sorceror Supreme (and therefore, the Avengers' resident expert on things that go boo in the night), and he'd want to meet Xander anyway, even if that demon and his minions had not crashed the party. Second, the demon DID crash the party, so he'd want the AAR from everyone that had a hand in dealing with the unwanted guests. Thirdly (most critical), his (Strange's) primary degree is in MEDICINE (before he became Sorceror Supreme, he was a crack surgeon) - he is also the Avengers' resident expert in all things medical (Thor is Strange's backup on the medical side - the why should be obvious).
Review By [SledgeHammer] • Date [23 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Live in New York 2: Rewrite" from (Past Donor)ScottWanderer
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A truly great Xander Story. Especially love where he explains the true danger of posting naked pics of She Hulk.
Review By [(Past Donor)ScottWanderer] • Date [13 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Live in New York 2: Rewrite" from Dragonelf
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This story was just as good as the last time I read it.


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Human beings, vegetables, or cosmic dust,
we all dance to a mysterious tune, intoned
in the distance by an invisible player.
- Albert Einstein
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [6 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Live in New York 2: Rewrite" from purrfus
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Your Xander is lots of fun to read - I hope its nearly as much fun to write so there will be lots more.

If / when you get a minute, the spelling / grammar needs a bit of polishing. In some places the words are spelled correctly but its obvious they aren't what you intended.

Example: “He did by the way her wording of his prayer to me,” Thor replied.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [11 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Live in New York 2: Rewrite" from Willowfan
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There has to be more than this, there just has to be! Please write more soon, I love it!

Willowfan
Review By [Willowfan] • Date [10 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Live in New York 2: Rewrite" from Harry
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LORDS OF LIGHT, KOBOL, JEST, AND TIME! Xander just became the adopted son of Thor and, by lineage, the adopted son of Odin himself! I think even the All Father would be proud that a mortal could do all this and would have a serious smile on his face that would make many a Assgardian lift their hearts and heads with pride. Even Loki, for all his mischief, would be impressed with what Xander has done this day!
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Calls From New York" from Harry
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Very nice G-Man! You just gave Xander the information, that with Thor on hand, to take care of business! BYE BYE DEMON!
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
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Xan Man, you have just endeared yourself even more to Cap and his friends than before. And that is saying something! Now, onto the next chapter!
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Live in New York 2: Rewrite" from VillageOrchid
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Well, written, cool and intense!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Live in New York 2: Rewrite" from (Past Donor)Jewel
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Interesting series - looking forward to more.

You seem to have had a problem with the last paragraph - its all run together, no spaces, and consequently hard to understand. Could you please edit it?
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [4 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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