Review of chapter "Not What He Was Expecting" from Rune
It lacks something, I'm not sure what... But it feels incomplete somehow. Akane is at least as strong as a Slayer I think, Have Travers take her. Or will the WC have Nabiki killed so another Slayer can be chosen. What would Ranma do if they were successful?
Review By [Rune
] • Date [12 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not What He Was Expecting" from Chikageko
I take it this is slightly after the wedding that wasn't? Poor nabiki though, this means she dies... and fairly soon too, travers was in his thirties for that black girl, somthing Wood and Wood had been a slayer for several years when spike killed her.
Review By [Chikageko
] • Date [24 Jun 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not What He Was Expecting" from orangemike
OK, but I'd like to see more of how the new slayer reacted to her changed powers.
Review By [orangemike
] • Date [8 Nov 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not What He Was Expecting" from zili
I love the ending of this fic, I think I've read this like five times
Review By [zili
] • Date [6 Mar 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not What He Was Expecting" from Anonymous Reviewer
Cute little fic! I loved how Nabiki asked for money to bethe Slayer and how she deferred to Ranma if she doesn't get her way. It makes me feel sorry for any watcher who gets assigned any of the Nerima crew. I really liked it and how you packed the punch in such a short fic.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [14 Dec 03] • Not Rated