I really liked the start of the story, especially Willow and Spencer's story line. It is a pity that you felt the need to tie everyone with one another though. Not only is Spencer Buffy's brother, but you make Gideon know Joyce as well? It all seems a bit contrived. As I said, a pity, as I can see an otherwise amazing story in this beginning.
Review By [chajalive] • Date [2 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Instant Attraction" from FireWolfe
Review:
OK back to ask for an update. I love this idea. Any chance you will bring it back alive?
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [24 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Instant Attraction" from FireWolfe
Review:
OK back to ask for an update. I love this idea. Any chance you will bring it back alive?
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [24 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Ok I just found this and I love it. I hope you consider updating it. I know it has been a while but this is great. You have the characters perfectly. More when you have time.
Lisa
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [19 Nov 09] • Not Rated
This is very good. They can't keep the secret from Spencer for very long. It would be cruel. Jason has to know that Spence would be putting 2 and 2 together. He will be upset if they don't level with him soon. Please keep going with this.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [8 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]