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Review of chapter "Mask Falling" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Interesting story, wish it could be continued!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [17 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mask Falling" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
Cool beans. I like this.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [11 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mask Falling" from kayron
Review:
This is another one of those stories that I think is good, but it has been left unfinished. I like pragmatic strong Xander. The idea of having other fandoms in the story was interesting too. Every so often I'll find a story like this and ask if it possible for the story to be adopted out. Maybe someone else would like to finish the story.
Review By [kayron] • Date [26 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mask Falling" from IcemanII
Review:
I just found this story. Very interesting ... but you haven't updated in some time. Any chance you will continue the story.
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [11 Aug 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mask Falling" from twoeightysix
Review:
Very nice story so far, I'd like to read more of it.
Review By [twoeightysix] • Date [3 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mask Falling" from kayron
Review:
This story is a little different from the usual Halloween fic. Xander doesn't just get the results of the Janus spell, he gets a peice of Janus too. And Xander used white magic (as opposed to the weird snake thing that Willow did to Buffy) to bring Miss Calendar back into the mix. This story has a lot of potential. I like it and would like to see more.
Review By [kayron] • Date [8 May 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mask Falling" from DomonKasshu
Review:
Please Update This Story! It's To Good To Be Left Unfinish Like This! HURRY! HURRY! HURRY! HURRY! HURRY! HURRY! HURRY! HURRY! HURRY! HURRY! HURRY! HURRY!
Review By [DomonKasshu] • Date [29 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes" from IAMZIPPY
Review:
CANT WAIT FOR MORE
Review By [IAMZIPPY] • Date [23 Aug 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mask Falling" from Elleria
Review:
Interesting so far. Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [12 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mask Falling" from Blackguard
Review:
this is really good so far, please update soon
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [19 May 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mask Falling" from KingHenrytheV
Review:
I like this version of the story much better. More questions are being answered as the plot develops, and the pace is much more even.

There is still a slightly rushed feeling to certain parts. As a reader, I would like to see more character interactions - particularly those involving Janna. I hope the next chapter slows the pace a little bit, so we can see more of the characters that the readers have grown to care about.
Review By [KingHenrytheV] • Date [16 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mask Falling" from purrfus
Review:
I don't usually care for Charmed crossovers, but I would like to see more of this.

Part of your spelling problem is spellcheck. For instance in the beginning you have spike and Spike. Spellcheck recognizes spike as a word not as a name so it wont remind you to capitalize. Other errors seem to be the result of typos accidentially spelling actual words. Spellcheck will not catch those errors.

It can be really helpful to print the work, and read it out loud to yourself. Having the hard copy makes it easy to make and track change notations.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [16 Apr 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mask Falling" from michaelangelo
Review:
Interesting, but needs fleshing out. You may find a star of David is a better throwing weapon than a crucifix and a little less castlevania.
Comments from author:
Sorry about that, I had just played Castlevania the day before.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [16 Apr 07] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mask Falling" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Great chapter.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [15 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mask Falling" from meatshield
Review:
great chapter... didn't you already have 2 chaps? did you rework them? if so they are just as good or better than the old ones. keep up the good work can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Yes, I rewrote the first two chapters to provide more background.
Review By [meatshield] • Date [15 Apr 07] • Not Rated
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