Review of chapter "The Flight of Rayne" from Silver
I just found this and was not going to even read it, as it has been so long since it was updated - 5 years! But I'm glad and sad that I did. Glad because it is a great story, well written, and I really like the focus on Dawn and the younger slayers as well as the interactions of the characters in Slytherin - and those few outside Slyth. Harry and the other Gryffs in the books weren't such unreasonably hateful prats, so I think there is a curse or something either on the House itself or the rooms that makes it so. It would certainly explain Sara's behavior. Am wondering why Dawn didn't have Willow check that out - after she calmed down. But why is it that Ginny & Neville don't behave that way? Do they have more willpower? Also love the bit with Ethan - especailly where Xander tagged him! (hope he got hit in the butt). I can only give this an 8 because I don't believe that you will pick this up ever again, which is a great shame. The reason I believe that is that the last review you replied to was in 2007, there is no e-mail, and I could not lcoate any info re: fics on your livejournal. Anyway, I enjpyed the story; sorry it has apparently been abandoned. Hope you revive this sometime.
Review By [Silver
] • Date [19 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Flight of Rayne" from KatieKat
I loved this story when I read it. I really hope that you update it again soon.
Review By [KatieKat
] • Date [18 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Flight of Rayne" from FireWolfe
Great story. I like that you made the goldern trio less than perfect. This is a very good fic. I hope you come back to it someday. It has a lot of potential. I always hated that everyone always thought the gryphs could do no wrong. I honestly think a lot of the issues with the Slytheriens might have been avoided if they had been kinder. Well more when you can if you can.
Review By [FireWolfe
] • Date [19 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Flight of Rayne" from Blkwoman
Re-read. Again!! It's been over two years. Please update.
Review By [Blkwoman
] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Flight of Rayne" from AshDawnSoulmates
I know you said at the end that it may take you a while to update again but it's been over two years!!! Please update again!!!!
Review By [AshDawnSoulmates
] • Date [15 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Flight of Rayne" from mokahi
I've enjoyed your story thus far and look forward to reading more.
Review By [mokahi
] • Date [6 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Flight of Rayne" from Terapsina
Please say that the next chapter will be soon because I love your story but i don't think that I will able to wait match longer without starting to be scary!
P.S. I give you 10/10
P.S. 2 This is my sister's Terapsina account.
Review By [Terapsina
] • Date [26 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Flight of Rayne" from Bunney
okay this needs even more!! I mean you left us hanging!!! That is straight up sabotage! get back here :)
Later and Love
Review By [Bunney
] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Flight of Rayne" from DeanandBuffyForever
Please update! This is a very good story. I can't wait for Dawn and Draco smoochies.
Review By [DeanandBuffyForever
] • Date [13 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Flight of Rayne" from KiayraZiveri
OMG!!! This is a really great story. It is written fantastically and draws me into it. I can't wait to find out what happens next. There are not many times when I am angry at the Trio but I like the way you wrote their behavior, there are times when I wanted to slap all three of them for their comments about the Slytherins. Overall, this is one of my favorite stories.
Review By [KiayraZiveri
] • Date [7 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Flight of Rayne" from Frogsareevil
Loved it! loved it! loved it and update soon!
Review By [Frogsareevil
] • Date [2 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Flight of Rayne" from Angelcake
Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its so awesome! want more PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [Angelcake
] • Date [2 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Flight of Rayne" from WriteTheGoodWrite
I'm really loving this story so far... but I desperately hope that Harry and the others get what's coming to them, or at least start feeling seriously guilty. Especially after that outburst Dawn had when Ethan mentioned her mother... they've gotta realize that something is up that really upset her. But I keep expecting them not to trust the rest of the Scoobies either... after all, Buffy is the sister of a Slytherin now.
By the way, this is Dana from the Angel episode "Damage" http://www.whedon.info/article.php3?id_article=16471&
I loved that episode. Horrifying and heartbreaking. :(
Update soon - PLEEEEEEEEEEASE!
~Tamora, the Cardboard Moon
Review By [WriteTheGoodWrite
] • Date [22 Jun 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Flight of Rayne" from MistressTitania
Very Intersting, I'm extremly intriuged with how you are portryaling the "golden trio", I wonder if Harry will ever snap out of it and realize these people are the good guys who could keep him breathing, hmmm, wonder if someone put some magic on the grif rooms and that's why that call forgot all the friendship over the previous years...hmm...like I said I'm very intriuged with this fic and look foward to more and more and more.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! I'm very glad you are intrigued and not turned off (I know there is a fine line between the two when it comes to how I am portraying the trio). I have the next chapter outlined, but am finding it hard to write for some reason. I hope to update soon. Thank you so much for the review!
Review By [MistressTitania
] • Date [5 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Flight of Rayne" from spk
WOW! I just discovered this story and I freaking love it!! I love the way that you're writing the HP characters and how seamlessly you are intertwining their lives with the lives of the Sunnydalers. There were just too many wonderful things to mention them all, but I do have to say that I loved the scene with Ethan, the showdowns between the Trio & the "09ers/Sunnydalers", and the Muggle Studies class. Great job creating tension and mysteries with the Hellmouth and the different interactions between the groups. I can't wait to see what you do with this. This is one of the best HP/Buffy crossovers I've read. Amazing job! :)
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! I'm really glad the groups are flowing together. I'm always scared sometimes situations might seemed forced, but I'm really happy so far they haven't come across that way. And I just LOVE discovering new stories that I really like. It's one of my favorite things. Especially when they are still being updated (I'm always sad when I discover an abandoned story, especially when I think it's a good one). But have no fear! This story is not abandoned. I've seriously spent way too much time with it to abandon it. Work has just been extremely hectic, but maybe I will be able to write this weekend (I hope so). Anywho, I'm so glad you like Ethan, I love him! I totally plan on having him pop in from time to time, just because he's fun. I didn't actually plan on having him in the story originally, but then I was re-watching Buffy episodes and I saw "Band Candy" and I remembered how much I wished he would have continued to pop up throughout the rest of the series. Okay, I think I've rambled on too long, so I will stop soon. I just wanted to say thank you! For the review and for the very kind and encouraging words. Thanks!
Review By [spk
] • Date [3 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]