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Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from TrevaRea
Review:
I like this and I am somewhat glad you didn't have her spill the beans, so to speak, yet. But I hope they all find out sooner rather than later. Also, I'd like to see Buffy react to Selmak.

If you need to bounce ideas off of, I'm available.

Treva Rea
Review By [TrevaRea] • Date [1 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from DancingQueen
Review:
....Don't like how they are treating Buffy in this one. But I do like the story. I wanna read more compadre!
Review By [DancingQueen] • Date [25 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from locard
Review:
This is a wonderful written story, well thought out. I really hope you will pick it back up someday.
Review By [locard] • Date [29 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Stationary
Review:
i think you've done an admirable job with this. i'm really interested in seeing whether, despite both party's efforts, if the bad guys learn of their shared connection...and the resulting shockwaves that come of it.
Review By [Stationary] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from kalahari
Review:
Buffy is going into the Mountain ill prepared, and emotionally upset.

There is not sufficient reason shown to the reader, why Buffy needs to visit the SGC.
There is not sufficient reason shown to the reader, why Buffy is that upset with the SGC.

Buffy is presented as someone emotionally unstable, who likes to throw around her power.
Normally she and Giles should be read into the SGC, without having to visit that place, and without any personal confrontation.
The only acceptable exception would be that the classification of the SGC is so high, that it can only be talked about on site.

Regards
Review By [kalahari] • Date [20 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from kalahari
Review:
> “Sam…Sam’s my older sister Willow.”

I would have expected "half sister" here, and in the following text. It makes a hell of a difference.

As they grew up in different families, socially Sam is more like a cousin than a sister to Buffy.
Of course inheritance rules and marriage rules are different.

Why would Willow feeling lied to. Sam is Buffy's half sister, Sam grew up in a different family, and it is a very private thing.
It would be a different matter if Buffy and Willow ever had paired up. I would have expected Buffy to tell her significant other a while before any engagement.

Regards
Review By [kalahari] • Date [20 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Starfox
Review:
Ah, one of teh best "Buffy is Sam's sister" stories. Too bad it looks like it's abandonned.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [10 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from bradsan
Review:
It's a good story. I wished that you update. I think my wish wasn't evil enough, still no update.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [28 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Two years since the last update.

Why are you doing this to me?
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [18 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from serenityselena
Review:
awesome story ....
intriguing twists ...
hope to read more ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [14 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Evil Author\Muse = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a terrific story, so please stop being one of the Evilest of Authors\Muses.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [11 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from aveave
Review:
Great story. Are you going to continue writing it? I hope you will, because I would like to know what will happen.
Review By [aveave] • Date [2 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from FireWolfe
Review:
Please update. This work is a very good idea for a crossover. It so sad when good works get abadoned.

Fire
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [19 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from lucyferr
Review:
Entertaining story :-) I like the basic premise.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [14 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from lucyferr
Review:
Feelin real sorry for Sam here
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [14 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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