why does she have to be paired with anyone at all? and for that matter, why are the only choices you've presented men and not women? she's bisexual or pansexual, if we have to go and label her preferences, so i think it's very possible that she could choose anyone to be with if she so pleases--providing they aren't Evil, of course. also, if you must choose someone, i think you should write your story and see which direction it's leaning toward...but that's just my style.
Review By [Stationary] • Date [9 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Dear Doris I love what you done so far. One of the great things about fanfiction is that you can go in any direction you want. Don't worry about changing things, that how you get some many great and different stories to enjoy. Also sometimes you have to beat that muse into submission to get it to cooperate.
Comments from author:
Thank you! It is, i have some ideas floating around and has been writing down pieces to the story when the muses has been in nice mood which is rarely these days. Sadly the pieces of the story that they give me often are about the end of the story which is of no help now when I am only at the beginning.
Review By [fayefree] • Date [27 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Almost, sadly. Everytime i think the muse that helped me come up with this is back in my grasp and working again she squeels 'Oh shiny' and runs of somewhere else. I am pretty sure she got some form of ADD. But I haven't given up yet, I am still tryingto come up with a chapter or 2.
Review By [darkbear] • Date [18 Nov 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Pick the longest lived elf you can (one that lives til they all leave), one that is a "minor" plot line in Tolkiens epic journey, keep the hubby/partner in the background as much as possible and tell the story from there.
Comments from author:
That was a pretty good idea. Thank you.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not a chapter" from VampWillowFan
Review:
I'm sorry to hear of the problems with your muses; I would really like to see this story continue.
A pairing with Glorfindel would be fine for me, why not?
Please continue, I really like this story so far, it's one of my favorites!
Comments from author:
Well muses can be tricky sometimes. I want to see it continue to but the only thing I manage to wrangle out of my muses so far are parts of original stories or bits of the ending of this fic. Well i do adore the balrog slayer but at the same time I love Gil-galad but in my opinion if he survives then the fellowship will be changed and I don't want to change them. Argh brain hurts to much worrying. Thank you for your compliments I appreciate it. /Doris
Review By [VampWillowFan] • Date [9 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A king in danger" from WinterRayne
Review:
great start hope you continue with this fic
Review By [WinterRayne] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Nicely begun. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with the upcoming chapters. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [31 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A king in danger" from Kowabunga
Review:
Hey, this is getting really good...I know pitifully little bout LoTR cos I haven't read the books (just seen the films) and don't know much background Elven knowledge so all is interesting...keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you! Well you don't have to be an expert to enjoy things. If one had to be then my life would be very boring. I will try but my muses are a tad rebellious at the moment, they will only give me ideas for the ending and pieces of another story. /Doris
Review By [Kowabunga] • Date [3 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Valarsized headache, freaky changes and new skills" from Kowabunga
Review:
Love how the story is going....'Robin-freakin-Hood'....hilarious....glad to see the muses are still on a leash :)
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it and I found that part funny to. That is something I am pleased about to. Had hoped I would have the next chapter up before the weekend but me and the muses have run in to one of those evil writer blocks so it wont be up until Sunday, well hopefully it will be done then. /Doris
Review By [Kowabunga] • Date [14 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Valarsized headache, freaky changes and new skills" from purrfus
Review:
Glad to see you continuing this. Might want to double check your spell / grammar checker because there are enough spelling errors that they detract from the story.
Comments from author:
Thank you. And I will check the spelling and the grammar as soon as I can, but some of the grammarwrongs will probably remain since grammar never been my strong point.
Intriguing. Poor Whistler; was he dressing as a 70's pimp in the middle ages?
Comments from author:
Thank you! Eh no, when it beginns he and our little redheaded wicca is in the future, 500 years after the battle against the First Evil, he never goes to the place where Willow are going.
