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TjinReview:
PLEASE Tell me this will be continued?
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Tjin] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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CPTSkipReview:
So freaking many questions. Please write more so I can learn a few answers. Very nice, if confusing, start.
PS Actually in a prolog you can throw in tons of confusing stuff, just so long as you eventually clear up the confusion in the main body of your story. A prolog is not a complete meal. It is an appetizer meant to whet the appetite for the full meal to follow. The main meal, sorry, the main story is the where you fill your audience in on what the heck is going on. Your prolog did what is was supposed to do, at least in my case. You have my attention and interest. Now I hope you write more so we, your readers, can have all our questions answered.
Review By [
CPTSkip] • Date [9 Mar 07] • Not Rated
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BobbokyReview:
cool
Review By [
Bobboky] • Date [7 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from
BillReview:
Great start!
Review By [
Bill] • Date [7 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from
mackenziexReview:
.... Cool, but where's Xander?
Review By [
mackenziex] • Date [7 Mar 07] • Not Rated
