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Review of chapter "Two" from purrfus
Review:
I was watching an old episode of Bones, and it made me realize how much I miss Zach. I decided to come re-read this again.

The scene with Dr. Goodman, and Andrew explaining the various types of stories made me laugh out loud.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [19 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Four" from Mierke
Review:
I've been reading a lot of Bones-crossovers lately, but none of them could make Zack believable. You did though, I really loved your Zack!
Review By [Mierke] • Date [30 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Four" from AnnaTheGreat
Review:
Gosh, darn, I was hoping for a really awkward sex scene at the end ... Oh well, absolutely brilliant, pairing up two of the most socially clueless people to ever be graced with floppy hair *gigglesnort*

Please do more!!
Review By [AnnaTheGreat] • Date [21 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Four" from purrfus
Review:
Congratulations on the 2007 COA nomination.

Wonderful job with character voices, especially Andrew and Zach.

I would love to see more of this someday.
Comments from author:
So sorry it took me so long to answer - I had computer problems and RL issues to deal with, but I did appreciate your comment! Thank you so much, and there may possibly be more eventually. *g*
Review By [purrfus] • Date [30 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Four" from Bluejello
Review:
*applause*
I think Zach/Andrew just became my new favourite pairing. That was hilarious, thank you!
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [17 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Four" from rhymneyfaries
Review:
Brilliant fic. Please write a sequel!
Comments from author:
There may eventually be a sequel, but at the moment I am swamped with working on "Undercover", two ficathons and I must come up with something for Seasonal Spuffy (which I signed up for in a moment of madness, without remembering how many /other/ fics I had on my plate.) So, probably not for some time, but I adore Zach and Andrew so eventually I will probably revisit this 'verse.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
Review By [rhymneyfaries] • Date [4 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Four" from Crydwyn
Review:
This was a lovely story, not too heavily concentrated on the romantic aspects, personally felt the balance was just right. Actually for that matter the Andrew/Zach pairing seems to perfectly ring true, the last line made me feel all warm and fuzzy. I've got my fingers crossed for the chance of a sequel, there seems to be so much potential for a series.... as I said, fingers crossed :D

~ Cry
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! I just love /both/ of those characters and would love to write a sequel - eventually - but right now, I have some other things I'm working on that I need to finish before I start anything else.
Review By [Crydwyn] • Date [20 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Four" from AnnOfMidnight
Review:
Oh my GOD! I never would have even gone there... I mean, I never would have thought that those two... WOW! Very well done. I liked everything about it.
Comments from author:
Thank you! From the time I first started watching "Bones", I loved the characters and felt that Zach and Andrew would make the perfect couple, but Zach's voice was very hard to capture - sort of like Oz, a lot of his "voice" is in the delivery rather than the words. It took me this long to feel comfortable writing Zach with reasonable expectations of his being a recognizable character, and then after all that, the boys refused to actually hook up! I was a tad bit disappointed. *sigh* So, it became more about the plot, but I still think they compliment each other perfectly and would make an adorable couple. *g*
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [23 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Four" from dulcinea
Review:
Wow! What a great fic! You had character development, and plot, and humor, and everything tied together so nicely! I hope you plan to continue with the adventures of Zach and Andrew. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Yes, I do have some plot bunnies hopping around, but I'm shoving them to the back burner until I finish my other comitments. *g*
Review By [dulcinea] • Date [21 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Four" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Hey awesome fic. Glad I finally took the time to read it. Cool how Zack worked out the patterns so easily.

Muchthanks also for the link to Amesia!Spike. And the hairy toes are funny :)
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Zach may be lacking in social skills, but when it comes to brain power things are almost too easy for him, and he tends to think that others "get" it as fast as he does.

And you're quite welcome.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [21 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Four" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Really enjoyed this!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much. I enoyed writing it, also.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [19 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Four" from Geyer
Review:
Oh, good, a happy ending for a great story. Very nice. I'm glad you made use of Zack and his forensic skills and scientific knowledge, too. And d'oh, I should have recognized Mahaliem in the name of Andrew's spell, because I adore Amnesia!Spike. Are you planning a sequel to this? I'd love to see the reaction of the others at the Jeffersonian to Andrew.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. The spell came about sort of as an accident. I had written the story, and only finished it the night before I was due to post it for the ficathon. I still hadn't gotten the last two chapters back from my beta. I was going over it, and suddenly realized exactly where I had gotten the "hairy toes curse", and my brain was too fried to think of something else to substitute. So I e-mailed Mahaliem and - thankfully - she gave permission for the shout out and the use of Anya's curse, so I didn't have to come up with another curse, AND I got the chance to rec one of my favorite fics. I'd love to do a sequel eventually, and I have some ideas, but right now have some other things in the works that I have to finish first. Thaks again for reading and commenting.
Review By [Geyer] • Date [19 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three" from Geyer
Review:
Poor Andrew, in such pain. It was funny and touching at the same time. And poor Giles, who must have found the patience of a saint somewhere. It was very kind of him to ignore Andrew calling him old and insane. (I laughed out loud, though.) Maybe if Zack asks Angela to teach him some social skills, she can teach Andrew to be suave and ennui as well. Like Giles, I was clueless as to what Andrew might have meant...maybe debonaire? I'm glad Willow was kind as well.
Comments from author:
Hee! Andrew picked up the word 'ennui' somewhere, "but I do not theenk it means what he theenks it means", to quote The Princess Bride. Giles is good with the research and technical support, but not-so-good with the emotional support. I just saw him as making a real effort to mentor Andrew, but wanting to stay far away from any personal confidences and being dragged into Andrew's emotional world in spite of himself. Yes! Perhaps Angela would be the better choice to teach him social skills - and she seems to have the ability to be emotionally supportive as well. At least, it would give poor Giles a break. *g*
Review By [Geyer] • Date [18 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Two" from Geyer
Review:
So very, very good. Andrew and Zack are guilty pleasures, and I love the way you have them interacting, and Dr. Goodman (another favorite of mine) analyzing the results. Lots of excellent lines, including Andrew's explanation of how to know if he's telling the truth and Zack's outraged, "You don't have any discretion!" These two are dangerously funny.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much. I really missed Dr. Goodman this year, so I was thrilled to be able to bring him back for this fic. Andrew and Zach are funny together, aren't they? I'd been looking for fics featuring the two of them since I started watching "Bones" because I thought they'd be naturally funny. I couldn't seem to find any, so eventually had to write one myself. Hopefully, I've opened the door to more, because they're a hoot together.
Review By [Geyer] • Date [18 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three" from Jorrie
Review:
HAHAHAHAHAH! YOU DO NOT KNOW HOW MANY TIMES I WANTED TO JUST BURST OUT AND LAUGH THROUGH OUT THIS ENTIRE FIC! My mum was starting to give me strange looks from the hallway as she passed around the first few bits of dialogue that came out of Andrew's mouth. I had to cover my mouth so that I wouldn't laugh out loud after that. This is HILARIOUS! You've REALLY caught Andrew's character in this. It was great! I could definitely see Andrew doing all of these things. Dead funny. I love Andrew centered stories. They're my favorite because he's so adorable! I cannot wait for more! I'll be waiting by for the next update faithfully! ^_~
Comments from author:
Thank you so much. I've always enjoyed Andrew as a character; he's just intrinsically funny, whatever he's doing or thinking. It's a joy to write Andrew because I don't actually have to do any of the work - I just sort of hear his voice in my head. Previously, I had written an Andrew and Harmony fic and thought nothing could top that combination until Zach Addy appeared. He may be an even better foil for Andrew than Harmony.

Thank you again for reading and commenting.
Review By [Jorrie] • Date [17 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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