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Review of chapter "A Stroke Of Luck" from Duskie
Review:
*bang* Gordon dead!






You have left me in pain. There should be a law against killing Oz with bastards.
Comments from author:
Yes, Gordon should die a bloody, bloody death. We'll see what we can do about that.

I'm sorry that I left you in pain, but that strong of an emotion from a fanfic is a good thing right?
Review By [Duskie] • Date [19 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Stroke Of Luck" from (Moderator)Saturn
Review:
Everyone knows Oz should have won,
but of course he wasn't the one with the gun.
Poor jordy all locked in his cage,
did he get killed? it's so hard to gauge.
All we can say for certain
is that you need to give Gordon some hurtin'
Comments from author:
I so love you! Thanks for the wonderfully thought out and rhyming review! :)
Review By [(Moderator)Saturn] • Date [14 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Stroke Of Luck" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Very well written. That said... you are so very EVIIIL!!! Not only did you kill my fav character, but you did it using a character I completley despise. Well done, even though I still think you're evil. LOL
Comments from author:
*beams* Oh thank you, EVIIIL!!!! is such a great compliment! :)

I'm sorry to have killed your favorite character, especially with Gordon as the murderer, but look at it this way, you can hate Gordon even more now. :)

Thank so much for the great review!
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Stroke Of Luck" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
*stares slack jawed* You killed Granddaddy Osbourne? You killed little Jordy? Like fish in a barrel? That was so wonderfully evil I think I'm a little afraid of you now. *beams*

I'm not sure what part I loved more but I think Oz shifting and trying to save Jordy is it. He died a hero, trying his damnedest to be strong and not a monster but when the chips are down Oz will do what he has to do to keep those he loves safe (I.E. Verruca) and you brought this across beautifully. The fact that Gordon killed Granddaddy Osbourne instead of just wounding him was sinisterly in character and it made me hate Gordon all the more.

Wicked vein-y Willow needs to make an appearance and split him from sternum to pubic bone. Maybe since the rise of the Watcher's Council they've been keeping tabs on all the peaceful werewolves. Offering them back up, assistance and such. So Oz's death causes ripples across the supernatural community and it gets back to Willow that way. Not that I'm pushing you to write a sequel. I'd never think of doing that. *puppy eyes*
Comments from author:
*sobs quietly in the corner* Yes I killed Granddaddy. Bad, bad me. Killing Jordy just felt kinda right - I think I might be going to that special hell :)

Thank you so very much for your comments on the characters - both Gordon (with shooting and killing the Grandfather) and Oz (trying to get Gordon to walk away but ultimately having to attack him).

I would love to have evil!Willow come and make an appearance, and that might be an option in the future, but not right now. Right now I have to try to figure something out for this week's challenge (which is kicking my ass) and my fic-a-thon entry.

:)
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Stroke Of Luck" from kizunakat
Review:
I can only pray xander or buffy or even faith find this asshole and show him what a monster he is. kizuna
Comments from author:
What about Willow? Don't you want to see evil, veiny Willow go after Gordon?
Review By [kizunakat] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Stroke Of Luck" from Nozomi
Review:
Ugg, how could you kill Oz like that?! You should have let him eat Gordon!!!!
Comments from author:
Sorry! I really debated about which one would win the final fight, but ultimately decided to stay true to the Supernatural timeline and that meant Gordon had to live.
Review By [Nozomi] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Stroke Of Luck" from (Moderator)Saturn
Review:
You are SO evil! We should be on a team or something. ;)
Comments from author:
A team? Us? That would be awesome or something! Thanks for the review love.
Review By [(Moderator)Saturn] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Stroke Of Luck" from SassyFrass
Review:
Die Gordon!! Die, die!!!
Comments from author:
I feel the same way!!!
Review By [SassyFrass] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Stroke Of Luck" from (Moderator)KaylaShay
Review:
Oh the evilness... I like the direction you went with it, morbid though it was. I really, really hate Gordon more after reading this. I think I'll need to do something with Gordon. What, I don't know. But I'll think of something.

Nice ficcage and GO TEAM HELLFIRE!

Oh, I really enjoyed that last line from Gordon. *evil grin*
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! Yes, that last line was pretty entertaining huh? I had a whole story plotted out, written, and then as I was rereading it I realized that I hated it, and then quickly rewrote this. But I'm glad that my little story helped fuel the fire for Gordon hatred. Yes, please use Gordon. There are so many layers to the man that definitely need to be explored.

GO TEAM HELLFIRE!!
Review By [(Moderator)KaylaShay] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Not Rated
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