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Review of chapter "Lightning Strikes" from Millaros
Review:
-whispers,with hidden cookie in hand- Update???
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. This is one of the two stories that I have plans for. Just need to find the time to actually write. :)
Review By [Millaros] • Date [30 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
So much death. So much violence. I loved it! *giggles like a school girl*

First I loved how you handled Post's death. The deviousness shown through her thoughts and the way she handled Cordy. How 'Meg' came to corrupt the Slayers (thinking all sorts of dirty thoughts with that one) and Buffy gave her the prefect out by killing her host. Which makes me wonder how many humans the Buff actually off'ed.

The fact that lightning isn't the most accurate weapon and 'Meg's' snarkiness over it was a nifty little detail. Your Giles while evil and while essentially 'Meg' he still had enough of his mannerism to make his killing the Scoobies eerie. And I thought I was bad for killing Willow. *applauds* You took it to new heights! I do so love being the bad guys.

Go Team Hellfire!
Comments from author:
It's good to be the bad guys. :)

I can't wait for the next challenge. I hope I can have my newly corrupted Slayers interact with some other baddies. Do you think Buffy would make a deal with the demon at the crossroads?
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)KaylaShay
Review:
Did the death thing scare everyone away? Don't know why, cause I loved it.

Possessed!Giles was very scary and this tiny little part of me almost wants to see the director's cut with the full gore level present. Just a little part of me. ;-)

Love how you handled the death of the scoobies. I just realized something. Did Angel die when he jumped in front of the lightening meant for Willow? That just kinda bypassed me last night. If not, is he still out lurking?
Comments from author:
Angel is still lurking....unfortunately. I thought about going back and rewriting the lightning bolt to kill him but I thought it would change the day after scene too much. I'm hoping that I can make one of the upcoming challenges include the Slayers on their quest to destroy the council.
Review By [(Moderator)KaylaShay] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)Demona
Review:
I'm your first review? WTF! With all this evilness surely there should be other reviews out there!

Copied shamelessly from my LJ reply:

Oh this was just evil. I'm so very proud to be on Team Hellfire with you. So much blood and guts and gore - and evilness! :) I'm very pleased with how this turned out. Great job. But man does that suck for the Scooby Gang. Any chance you will be writing a sequel of sorts to show Buffy and Faith's revenge upon the Council?
Comments from author:
I really, REALLY want to write the Slayers in the Roadhouse. Maybe meeting up with Gordon or some other evil of the week. Won't it be weird when Faith has to tell Buffy to chill out with the violence?
Review By [(Moderator)Demona] • Date [12 Mar 07] • Not Rated
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