Wow...I like this story a lot...I hope you come back to it! Oh...is Willow going to be using her magic in this? Because she is one of the most powerful witches ever...anyways...can't wait for an update!

good story, I'm interested to see where you go with it - although I'm hoping you'll make enough changes to the film to make it different.

Wow! I've read a few Firefly crossovers but this has to be one of the best. I'm absolutely intrigued to see where it's going, and honestly I felt like I was reading an episode (long episode, but episode).

I especially like: Mal always muttering that he is the captain, he was sure that hadn't changed. Yet apparently people are telling him what they want to do. Little Creek, she fits well as Dawn (your pairings are a good fit) is just as I pictured her, always knowing so much, but so alone in everything. Her paired with Jayne... that would just be odd. Big brother, little sister yeah. Willow seeing Tara and the heartbreak over it, and the Amy/Willow pairing should be interesting. And Faith is just always cool. Love it!

I'm curious to see what kind of demon, excuse me, half-demon Ross is and why it's so important everyone forget certain things.

It was Mah-ve-lous dahling, I'm looking forward to more!

love it !!!

This is a great story!!! I love it, and the pairings are so clever!!! My only question is, are you ever gonna get to Rayne? Poor River, she's so lonely!!!

i like it...my two favorite shows merged...can not ask for more

This is really good, can't wait for more!!

Wispr

You know this has to be my favourite line in the whole series, comics and movie:
“This is the Captain, we have a little problem with our entry sequence, so we may experience some slight turbulence and then… Explode.” Mal says over the loud speaker.

Makes me laugh every time. And this is so not going the way I thought it would. When you showed who was who, in their past lives, I thought I knew what was going to happen, but now it is all different. Good different, great even, but different. Can't wait to find out what happens next.

Thanks, Its my favourite line as well... That and maybe...
Mal: You just got to scare him
Jayne: Pain is scary.
Mal: Just do it right.

Thanks for the review, would love to know what you thought was gonna happen, cos the next chapter... hopfully none of you will know whats coming! That or I completely screw everything up! its 50-50 at the moment.

Thanks for the review,

Tubbs McGee

Interesting story but where is it going?Mayhap will find out soon I hope.

Good work. I wonder how Ross and Faith will do...

Fear not! I for one still love it! Continuance is a must, trully this tale is becoming oh-so-magnalicious!

Thanks man, your the best. Go over to Slayer World and check it out... A lot of talented writers are over there playing, a lot better then me.

nice chapter keep up the good work

I loved everything jayne said!!!

I am enjoying your story a whole big lot. Lol! I like how you have linked the past to the future and you have made me laugh a lot. I hope there will be more to this story as I think you have a deft touch with characterization and dialog and now I want to see how you handle plot. Lol! Thanks for a lot of fun as well as a bit of melancholy. Now please write more. Lol!

You are doing quite well here. You had a great idea, and you wrote it down for us to enjoy! After that you have been doing what every good writer does you have let the story take its own shape in its own time! The pacing is great, the characterization is well done, and the plot thus far is wonderful. Keep up the good work.