Very hot fic! Funny too! I loved that Rodney was the dominant one, that he was the one in-control, in-charge instead of Faith, who usually is... It was very sexy and well.. so Rodney. Hehe.
Loved it!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [29 Sep 09] • Not Rated
How the frell did I miss commenting on this when I first read it? I could swear that I did...maybe it was on LJ? Anyway, I loved this to absolute pieces! Faith/Rodney is one of my all time favorite pairings, just because of the way you write them and this story is one of the main reasons why. I'm glad I decided to reread this story before the sequel you recently posted so that I can leave proper feedback here.
Thank you! Please keep writing this pairing, I love it beyond all reason.
Oh YEY! Rodney not as a fumbling guy, but as the brilliant man he is. Thank you for writing this. Not only is it lovely smut, but Rodney and Faith's personalities are written so, so well. Both characters tend to get shortchanged and stereotyped in fanfic. It's a pleasure to read them as real, rounded characters.
Comments from author:
It always bothered me that people write Rodney with no skills. The man is practically OCD and I can't imagine he hasn't put just as much time and study into that as any other area of interest. Thrilled you enjoyed and thanks for taking a second to drop me a line! ~Ves
Review By [starshinedown] • Date [6 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Cute pairing, good ta see Faith not only using her mind, but connecting. And connecting.
:)
Comments from author:
It's the second connecting that made me laugh. I've always said Faith is actually pretty smart - just in a load of non-traditional, non-book ways. Rodney would have quite a time with that...she's brilliant in a million ways he's never considered valuing before.
Many thanks! ~Ves
Review By [Shieldage] • Date [20 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Okay, I thought nothing could be hotter than Jinni's Faith/McKay slam-bang story, but your Faith-and-Rodney-actually-make-a-mental-as-well-as-physical-connection follow-up on the "Writing on the Wall" story has totally converted me. And, like Rodney and Faith, I can definitely live with that!
Comments from author:
I was laughing as we got going on this "porn off" because I knew, even with the same pairing and the sacred mission to write PORN, our fics weren't going to turn out anything alike. Faith's not particularly patient, but I'd like to think she could have some fun playing cat and mouse with someone with whom the pay off might be worth it. Someone like...oh, Rodney?
Glad you enjoyed and always a pleasure to see a review from you! ~Ves
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [19 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Fun, with substance. More of this relationship would be delightful.
Comments from author:
For me PWP has always meant "Porn with Plot". I can't get away from looking for those little character quirks that would make one character want another or that would add some little twist that would make any horizontal action something unique to those two characters.
Many thanks! ~Ves
Review By [purrfus] • Date [19 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Nope, sorry - can't pick a winner. Looks like you'll both have to write more Faith porn!
Comments from author:
*LAUGHS* And I'm sure reading more Faith porn would be SUCH a hardship for you. So brave to encourage us inspite of the personal sacrifice it would entail on your part....*wink*.
I'll keep the burning need for Faith porn in mind. And thanks for the kind words! ~Ves
Review By [jrabbit] • Date [19 Mar 07] • Not Rated
That was ridiculously cute and I hope you add more to this. I can completely see Faith starting to rile him up while he's in the middle of a lecture... can't you?
Heh heh, totally needs to be continued, whether with porn or without, this pairing is too adorable (especially when YOU write it) to be allowed to go fallow.
Danke
Comments from author:
Hmmm....the ways Faith would come up with tease and torture Rodney...Wow. That could be an entire series.
The wheels, they are a turnin'. *grin*
Thanks so much for the kind words! ~Ves
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [19 Mar 07] • Not Rated
At first I wasn't entirely sure what to think about this story, wasn't even sure I was going to read it. But then something compelled me too and well... I got hooked and from what I can tell your characterisations were spot on too.
About the only thing I can find to complain about is that there isn't anymore to this story.
Comments from author:
I feel especially flattered to have won someone over rather than just "Ooh! Faith/Rodney - yes please!". These two are too fun to write for me to leave them languishing for long.
Thrilled to little bits that this worked for you and thanks for taking a second to review! ~Ves
Review By [LallaBelle] • Date [19 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]